Reviews for Axiom
Bob chapter 1 . 4/13/2019
To tell the truth if he got antlers the size of an average deers (or even slightly smaller ones) cutting them off is the wise thing to do if he want to keep being an hunter...they would make great handle and a blow to the head that he could narrowly dodge without antlers would hit him if he got them.
crystal-shinobi chapter 1 . 2/22/2019
this was fantastic I hope you update.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2018
Damn it I liked jaune liking his family they did it to protect him
shadow chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
I liked the chapter!
NeechiGaming chapter 1 . 3/23/2017
I liked the story so far I hope you update it
Marshman101 chapter 1 . 1/13/2017
More pls this I want more and I kinda hope Nora breakers some knees
commandosquirrel chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
Awesome also try putting the challenge in fanfic form help spread word
desdelor97 chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
This was a great chapter.
Please keep up the great work.
Emperor-Aurora chapter 1 . 6/12/2016
This actually is better because at least in this you're not kissing Kishimoto's ass.
J.E.P 1996 chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
In all honesty I liked it. Though I was surprised that you didn't make this darker in tone as some of your older stories are. If there are any things that need to be addressed it is the fact that I think that the overall pace of the story was a bit fast.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
The fuck is wrong with the morality in this story ? This is complete bullshit, what right to they have to put their noses in there ? To force him to decide what is good and bad for him ?
If he doesn't want to talk about it, then he doesn't want to talk about it, this is as simple as that. I've seen thousands of fanfic doing the same manhandling and 'how dare you not trust us', I'm sorry to say that, but it is always bullcrap. Even in the canon work with Blake.
And seriously, who in their right mind would trust those people ?

I'm honestly disapointed . I expected better.
TheNiemand chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Recomment story: RWBY: 'Tomorrow and Never Again' - By PaulXion
Bill Nye chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
Your writing is alright, but I hated every character. They all acted like a bunch of holier-than-thou asshats. They remind me of the social justice warriors you see around colleges these days. "Everything is racist and we know best."
Random Reader chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
I'll be honest, all his friends are acting like assholes. They might be doing it because they care about him but the way they are treating him is awful. You don't just brute force your opinions one someone like that and especially when it is something like this.

Because of their attitude, I couldn't enjoy this story. The entitlement they feel to his secrets is sickening.
Saberus9 chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
Hmmm... I am intrigued.

Good writing so far.

I too wonder why the Arcs did these things.
Is poor Jaune adopted or a child born from an affair?
The sisters may have been just teasing not realising the racist undertones of their pranks.
It may be that his family were indeed trying to protect him with this behaviour.
Jaune at least in canon strikes me as the black sheep of the family but not unloved.
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