Boy, this is going to be difficult for Draco. Not everyone is going to understand and/or forgive. And what about his mother. She’s still in danger. Great chapter.

Great chapter

Draco apparated with them? That’s good. Gotta get away from Bellatrix and V as much as possible. We all owe Narcissa.

Must have been difficult for Draco to see Hermione dragged to the manor. :(

Our poor baby. I never like it when he cries and none of us can’t even give him a hug. Ugh! :(

I wonder how they’re going to resolve it when and if Draco tells her what’s happening or will they be able to resolve heir problem if Hermione finds out on her own

I wonder what Hermione when she finds out Draco’s activities. I hope she won’t turn away or report it to Harry.

Hot chapter ;)

Ron should really leave Hermione alone unless they’re in a relationship. If they’re just friends he should let her be. Anyway, it’s a funny chapter. I like it.

Hard to Breathe? Did you mean Draco or the reader? In this chapter it’s the reader who is finding it hard to breathe. ;)

This should be interesting. :)

If you’re a native speaker, your word choice is sometimes odd as is the phrasing in some places.
If English is a second language, you’re doing amazingly! I don’t think I could ever write a story in my second language!
I would’ve liked to see more character development before they ‘gave in’ to each other, perhaps some anger at themselves for turning away from everything they knew as right or a reluctance to accept their growing attraction. It doesn’t seem awfully realistic for Draco to be so dismissive of his family’s ideology.
All of that being said this story seems so be going well so far! It takes a lot of talent and perseverance to write a story - I really admire you for it!

Can't wait for more

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update