YOU COME BACK! SO GREAT!

Hey everyone sorry about not posting the new chapter I've been sooooo busy with work and now planning a wedding! I have basically had no time to write and when I do I'm pulled away for other things! TTTT IM REALLY WANTING TO CONTINUE AND I PROMISE I WILL SEE THIS STORY TO THE ENDING I FEEL IT DESERVES!

love the story please update soon

Im actually obsessed! I don't know if you are still actively writing but I love everything about this! Your writing is captivating and the way you have made this story your own is Awesome! I love Hades and Persephone you have done them justice, This Fic is truely a master piece!

It's almost impossible to read this story! Every time a character talks, you're supposed to break into a new paragraph. It's really bad grammar to keep them lumped together like this.

Hey guys sorry, it's taking so long for me to update due to problems irl; working, moving and other things. So please be patient I am working hard on finishing the next chappy! BUT IT'S GOING TO BE COMING SOON!

Please please please please update soon, my heart can't take the wait!

This is a really good story please don't abandon it and please please please update it soon
I pretty much liked this story a lot and my imagination is running wild with what may happen next so pls don't abandon it and update it asap!

The story and the plots are good. I'm not going to comment grammar because it isn't my forte, but there are several things that make me want to abandon this story:
1. Punctuation. Your sentences are sometimes without proper commas or full stops and I got really annoyed. I'm kind of sensitive about punctuation, you see
2. Please, for God's sake, divide your paragraph into smaller ones... I got really, really tired of reading one loooong paragraph. If you are wondering, I'm reading and typing this through my cell phone and, to be honest, the paragraphs are... irrittatingly long.
I know you are really excited writing this story, but please don't let that excitement torture the readers...
3. Probably you should get a beta reader.
I'm going to follow this story for now and see whether it's making some improvements or not

reallly reallly good more please

I LOVE THIS STORY! PLUS YOUR A REALLY AWESOME AUTHOR, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE O FÍLOS MOU!

Hades secretly loves her!? When is it not going to be a secret! Those two are the cutest!
Can't wait for the next update where Persephone is gonna kick som butts!

I love your story, I can't wait for the next update!

Yeayy an update. You are doing well! I love the bond between Thallo and Perse! Was so lovely..
And my God how I hate Zeus...he deserves worst than what he got..I mean..he hurt Persephone!
Lastly...gosh do I love every moment between Hades and Perse! Just gotta love them both!
But one thing I esp. applaud is the length of each chapter u write! And might I add that u write well! Good job.
Hope to hear more from you

The chapter and well, the whole story is just pure awesome! I really did enjoy it. Love the plot and the characterization. And my my, you really do update super long chapters! Which is another reason why i love reading this story.
Though I have to say that Persephone is really tough on Hades! Wouldn't she get into trouble for it!?
And oh gosh how i hate Zeus in here! Annoying.
Hope to read more from you.