Reviews for No Retribution
Bluemom chapter 41 . 6/9
Great update! Can’t wait for more!
missfites chapter 41 . 6/7
This is absolutely fantastic. I can't wait for you to update. Best fic I have read in forever
peygoodwin chapter 41 . 5/27
Love!
n612 chapter 41 . 4/17
Hello,
I just finished reading your story (the chapters you wrote until now) and I must say I really like your writing style. I also like that the relationship between Thea and Daryl is growing slowly because I think it's more in line with Daryl's personality. I don't see him as a person who would fall in love quickly and show his feelings openly in front of others (often).
I have only one question and one remark; I got confused about the name of Thea’s nephew because sometimes he’s called Hank and sometimes Henry or is Hank maybe a nickname (because his birth name is Henry Simon …). The remark is about how Thea (and even her sister Cat once) has always this way of knowing someone is suspicious and there is something off about them. Maybe it would be interesting to give it a backstory: she took a course of how to read body language when she was a student, or something … because if you are under stress (and she is under stress practically all the time) and not a professional it is really difficult to read people, especially people that are doing something for a long time.
I hope you take this as constructive criticism
As I said I really like this story and I hope you update soon.
All the best, n
Krismtay13 chapter 41 . 4/1
I'm loving Thea! I like how the relationship between her and Daryl is going. I really hope you continue with this story!
SarahELupin chapter 41 . 3/4
Read this all in one sitting! I love the development between Daryl and Thea. You a good writer
Dawnie7 chapter 41 . 2/12
' "Okay, well, first of all…work on your wording. '
Ha! Yeah, no kidding. Does she not realize how easily excited we all get? Hell I know what she meant and I still got a small bubble of giddy excitement. I also love the way she finally admitted, out loud, that yes she is in love with him, and just seems so defeated by it, lol. Oh the poor girl, she does have it bad. And I love every bit of it! It was also great to see them starting real, legitimate plans to take on the Saviors. It's scary and uneasy, but there's still a sense of excitement that they're fully in this battle now. The way you wrote out the part about them taking the dynamite was so anxiety inducing, and that's with me knowing what happens! I also really like this dynamic of Thea accidentally discovering Tara's secret. I really don't know what I think her reaction will be, if she'll keep Tara's secret or if she'll spill the beans. But I'm definitely excited to see what it'll be!
RHatch89 chapter 41 . 2/11
Awesome update :)
Dawnie7 chapter 40 . 10/10/2019
I don't know if I'm just seeing things and/or reading too much into things because I'm just so excited about Daryl and Thea being back side by side again or what, but it's like after that kiss the night before they're kind of totally in sync today. Standing in mirrored positions, thinking the same thing, they've got this whole silent communication thing going on...it's kinda adorable, really, hehe. But then this little sleepover of theirs. I couldn't help but giggle at the sheer awkwardness of it all, but then she woke up the next morning and he was gone and I don't know how I feel. Can't decide if he was just feeling bashful and totally out if his element so he panicked a little and bailed, or if it has something to do with the Negan black dress thing. So many questions...that I feel like I won't like the answers to.
Bluemom chapter 40 . 10/3/2019
Great update! Glad you’re back
courtneyib98 chapter 40 . 9/27/2019
I love this story! I binge read this whole thing in two days Just couldn't put it down. Thea is probably one of my favourites OCs and you've kept Daryl in character. The way he interacts with Thea is believable. I much prefer a slow burn romance to them falling in love with each other after like three days. So thank you for this story and I'll be eagerly waiting for your next update.
RHatch89 chapter 40 . 9/19/2019
Awesome update :)
ks90 chapter 39 . 5/29/2019
I love this story and I can't wait to read more!
Guest chapter 39 . 5/28/2019
I love this story so much
Guest chapter 39 . 3/31/2019
I was on a BNHA fic binge, so I hadn't touched this fic in a while, but I'm so glad I reread this, you have no idea how much I love this fic~ and the way that you portray Daryl in a relationship. I also love your Thea, and I'm like... kinda curious about what's gonna happen with Negan, 'cause that's... a thing, lol. I mean, he was trying to flirt and I honestly thought he would offer/coerce her into the infamous harem by this point in time. *Anyways* I'll be keeping an eye on the story now that I'm finally caught up~
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