You stupidly normalized cheating. Bore off!

The plotline is just about Michael thinking about and getting jealous about Rose, Nikita, Nikita, Rose, Rose, Nikita, and more Nikita and Rose and Nikita and Rose. What a stupid plotline. Lmao. If he sees them both with another man he'll feel sad and jealous. Aww poor him how pathetic... What a childish pathetic shit. I'll feel sorry for Nikita if she will be with that pathetic boy. He doesn't even know what and who he wants. He's catching feelings for two women. Lmao

In the first chapter his imagination already stripped Nikita naked(at the same time thinking about getting excited about Rose lmao). And then when he saw Nikita with another man he felt like dying in jealousy(and he also feel dying in jealousy for Rose). And there's no cheating? Bitch, cheating is not just physical. He didn't even admit that he felt something for another woman while he's thinking about his girlfriend. Lmao. If he's a real man, he should've admitted even to himself that he felt something the moment he saw that irrelevant Nikita. Or maybe Nikita is really nothing but a figment of imagination. Lmao. I would laugh if he goes to Nikita. Cause he will also cheat with her with Rose. Lmao. What a pathetic fuckboy.

Great. Michael is a fuckboy thinking and thinking about 2 women at the same time. How awful. And there's no cheating? Woah. A man thinking about 2 women at the same time is already considered cheating. Is this a threesome or something? You didn't even put who's the real leading lady of Michael here, stupid. Do you even know who is the real ship here?
Nikita is a non-existent character here. Lmao. She's not even relevant. Does she even have a life? :D She doesn't even look real cause it looks like she's just nothing but a figment of Michael's imagination. Rose's name was mentioned 100x than her name. What is Nikita in this shit anyway? An extra? A ghost? Or a shadow? A FILLER? It's been 10 chapters and I don't even feel that she existed. Why you didn't put that this so-called romance is just all about Michael and Rose? Look at them, even after they broke up they still have more scenes together. Nikita WHO? This is so dumb. The development of story was clearly wrote in a dumb way. This story doesn't make sense. The plot has no sense. It's just about the man who has two women and thinking about two women every 5 seconds. He'll probably just go back and forth between 2 women every 10 seconds. Awesome.

I see you haven't updated this story in a while but I am hoping you do. What's with Michael and Nikita's relationship? Will there be any telling of this story from Nikita's POV? Not a real Bachelor or Bachelorette fan but I would find it funny if Nikita was a contestant.

Update soon

Excited for more! :))) plz continue

Good to see this story is till active. Cannot wait for the next update

Awesome so far. Awaiting the next chappies. Also, trump won lol. But i do understand if you wrote that paragraph earlier. Still, great job. Looking forward to more.

please continue lol and stay inside Michael's head. its awesome so far :)

loving it! please continue

really cool job! please continue! : )))

awesome story! please continue!

awesome please continue

really well done so far...