| Reviews for Turning a New Leaf |
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  Guest chapter 29 . 7/4 First of all,WOW you should legit became a ,I loved this story so much that i am kind of sad that it’s Job! |
| Olivia chapter 28 . 5/25 First of all, WOW! This is absolutely incredible! This story is skillfully written from beginning to end. I can't believe it. The love story is adorable, beautiful and honestly feels like something Alex Hirsch would write. everyone in the story acts like themselves and they never seem out of character. Ugh! I could gush about it for hours. I can only hope to write like this one day. 10/10 would read again. I'm gonna recommend this to my friends. You definitely have a future in writing! |
| K chapter 29 . 4/23/2019 To be honest, when they mentioned going to Japan, I thought they were going to look for kitsune or other yōkai (or yokai or youkai, however you want to spell it). Still a great story! |
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/4/2019 I both hate and love tech rehearsals. |
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/5/2018 Wait is it Lucas or Logan |
 Flawles chapter 29 . 7/8/2018 Marvellous Work right there. Love it, all of it. |
| Shaeril McBrown chapter 29 . 6/27/2018 Can you make a fanfiction about Pacifica Northwest's parents are replaced by a nice and fun-loving Hispanic couple. |
| Shadowdoom10 chapter 11 . 4/18/2018 *slow claps* You did it. You managed to make Preston and Priscilla Northwest even bigger scumbags than the show. |
| RasenganFin chapter 21 . 4/2/2018 Kasabake nice. Now all they need is a Colorful unmissable Ninja in a head engulfing Helmet with a Shuriken design for the Visor. |
| Carcer14 chapter 25 . 3/20/2018 Still rereading this story and I found out that you referenced Miraculous Ladybug here XD |
| 348joey chapter 24 . 3/11/2018 "dodged the blade" That's one sharp brick. |
| 348joey chapter 22 . 3/11/2018 Yeah, people aren't mellow enough when they're dying. "reptilian like" doesn't really need "like" in it, as "reptilian" is already an adjective. |
| 348joey chapter 21 . 3/11/2018 "'The procedures needed to make a baby?' Only you could make sex sound as dull as a [step-by-step] manual." Yeah, but that's part of what makes him Dipper. This reminds me of a line from my own story where Frisk is told he can make the most romantic of gestures sound like the cold logic of a machine. |
| 348joey chapter 19 . 3/11/2018 A tackle hug is known as an "attackle". |
| 348joey chapter 17 . 3/11/2018 Oh joy, she's jumping to conclusions again without bothering to ask the reasoning behind actions. Being a good character and person, she'll probably feel like a butt when she finds out. |
