This is one of the best stories I have ever read!
I wish I could write you a long detailed comment like you deserve, but I'm terrible with words... So just know I think you have an incredible talent. Thank you for putting work and talent into this , and then being kind enough to share it with us all and i am wholly grateful to you for writing it.
You incredible!

So love youre stoty!

That was totally amazing! The mystery and the action were fabulous. I loved the background insights. Pike always rocks! Great story!

Thank you for another stupendous Star Trek story! May you continue to write many, many more!

This is truly an excellent story; I had trouble taking a break from it to do ordinary things like sleeping and eating-it's that good!

Amazing as always!

hey there, i loved your story all the way! It was very nicely written and all the characters were on point! In the end i would have loved a scene were Spock and Jim were talkinh about what happened. That would have made all of this even more perfect! Thank you for sharing!

Is this a yaoi fanfic? Pls tell me it isn't...

Thank you for sharing this amazing story that had me completely immersed in it for hours. Excellent characterization and a very natural bridge for the budding relationship we get to enjoy between Kirk and Spock. Absolutely can't wait to see what you concoct for Beyond.

Thank you very much again for this story. It was - as always - a perfect combination of interesting storyline and emotional and medical drama between The famous Three. I am more than excited for your Beyond-stories because I know that you are one to find great loop holes or/and hints towards TOS to write an amazing new fiction. Can't wait for it - thank you. tin

great Story, thanks for sharing!

Jim certainly seems to pick up anything dangerous that is around...

not a good start for the 'away-missions' ... no wonder bones wants to stay aboard the ship

You kept me totally occupied for a few hours! I really enjoyed your story. Please write more! You and a few others on here know how to write a nice, decent well planned story. Continue with more! Thank you!

[SPOILERS FOR STAR TREK BEYOND AHEAD SO DON'T READ IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN IT YET!]

Would you please entertain the idea of writing something where Spock is seriously injured? I really liked how Beyond handled those scenes between Spock and Bones and the little bit where Kirk was involved as well. I would really love it if I could read something penned by you that spring boarded off of that idea...just a suggestion to consider if you're interested.