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reptilegirl chapter 10 . 6/26/2017
Really good few mistakes would help if you would like put Deans P.O.V or something when you change it
Catalina Leigh chapter 22 . 5/24/2017
I love love Love this! If your rewrite is as good as this one, or even better, then it's going to be amazing! Love this take on the boys and John and Mary. :)
G.L.Williams.97 chapter 20 . 11/13/2016
Love this story. Can't wait for a sequel :)
Ruby chapter 21 . 11/9/2016
Can't wait to read what you are editing and what is on Watt pad. (Sorry I don't think my other comment posted)
Ruby chapter 21 . 11/9/2016
I can't wait to read what you have written on Watt pad! I write on there too! Looking forward to reading your story!
Destiel101 chapter 20 . 8/14/2016
Loved this, but there were some errors. Mostly misspelling, wrong words used. I was wondering if you wanted me to fix them? If you still have copies of this, you could send them to me, through docs on here or email and I'd be happy to fix it up. I wouldn't change the story, just fix any word errors and add in some punctuation here and there to help it flow a little better. Then once I send it back, you change replace the chapters with the new, grammatically improved versions. Just an offer, I very much enjoyed the story.
pipinheart chapter 20 . 5/3/2016
It seems the walls have been broken down on Dean. I wonder if they will adopt them.
pipinheart chapter 15 . 5/3/2016
Love that Cad stood up for there game is a way to get to know them.
pipinheart chapter 14 . 5/3/2016
Like that Bobby is John's boss. Dean needs to start letting go a bit,he is so afraid.
pipinheart chapter 4 . 5/3/2016
A good story. Would love to hear what happened in their other foster homes. also you are mixing up our:are.
Elektra Elentari chapter 20 . 5/3/2016
I loved this! I hope the sequel has started
Snovolovac chapter 20 . 4/25/2016
*emits a high pitched sound and falls to the floor* thank you for writing this *passes out*
Guest chapter 20 . 4/19/2016
Loved this. Need more
Charlotte chapter 19 . 4/19/2016
Need more please soon
EllieDragon chapter 20 . 4/21/2016
Hi, would just like to say this story is really good! Can't wait for the sequel! I noticed throughout the story that, I know you mentioned it, your gramma was incorrect. For example, you kept using "are" instead of "our" until the final chapter, and "there" instead of "their", and some other spelling mistakes and mistypes like you would write "tehm" instead of "them". But other than that, your story was really really good! I love it! Keep up the good work :)
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