I really love this and the inspiration you got from Sailor Moon was spot on

LoL it's really hard for us Sailor Moon fans not to love this series. It's so awesome. And this was an interesting twist to "Storm The Castle". I think Tom and Toffee are my favorite characters, although Ludo is fun too. X3

WOW! When i read the summary you had me at prince diamond (he is my favorite villain in sailor moon for the exact scenes you re-did here) though unfortunately serena didnt revive diamond. But you did a great job at keeping the parallel yet still keeping star and everyone else in character!

It is just awesome the plot and the couple ( oh gosh star and tom are so hot together*-*) your wrighting skills are also fantastic please please dont abondon this story I need another chapter ( chapters ) :3

this is awesome please update I don't want this to be one of those stories that are good and just stops updating

This is a really good story. It has a lot of fast paced action as well as some good drama. Toffee is an intimidating opponent.

As controlling and jerkish as Tom can be, I do think that deep down he does care about her. It's not hard to believe that he'd sacrifice himself for her either. I do like that she didn't leave him to die.

This is a wonderful story.

Why does this not have a review? You're good at writing, man!