The writing could use some inprovement. You are making him weak for no reason.. Why does he need a Semblence to be strong?

Can you make another chapter I would love it alot

Again being used as a punching bag is not really effective training. Unless It Is To raise Defensive So Strong he can not Take As much damage..

F**k...Off...

Why does Jaune have to be purposely weak in this? I get that he can't use his semblance, but you're giving a really shitty reason for why Jaune has to look purposely weak to others. I get that his semblance can be activated in combat, but it seems like it can get activated immediately over the tiniest amount of excitement Jaune gets from it. This seems like a flimsy excuse just to make Jaune be incredibly weak for no real reason other than, 'because of canon'. Unless I'm missing something here

I thought Jaune had seven sisters, but I don’t mind diverging, after all it is already very different

You i couldnt keep reading this you didnt make arc angry enoigh jes to happy amd gentle in my opinion. I think he sjould be a complete assjole to everyone. But your still a good writer from what i can tell i just dont like this story

Ugh overpowered Jaune fic, hoooooraaaaay.

interesting! well done!

Pleas update soon

Holy cliches and tropes batman!

Awesome job

Before I begin, I read your AN. And I have to agree with you. They could have chosen so many routes. And don't get me started on killing her off for the concept of Character Development.

If that was the case, why wasn't that shown in the fourth Volume? But that asides, I read your chapter and something tells me you'll be taking us on a rollercoaster. Also, nice confirming this will be an Arkos story.

But alas, you decided to hit us with a hard argument as to why Pyrrha chose to interact with Jaune. Seems like his angel had selfish motives that are explainable but still hurting him. I wouldn't have guessed that you decided to let Ozpin tell Jaune that Pyrrha was chosen as candidate. If he had known that in canon, it might have been different.
As for DarkElucidator. Even if Jaune is as dense as Ichika (however I very much question that, because in the end he got the message, albeit too late), he still would have made a difference if he knew what the hell was going on.
He only learned of Ozpin's later tactics when Qrow told RNJR of what was going to happen. I'm feeling that this is a better solution.

The explanation of what really happened and how it would be a different route but still alongside canon was a nicely chosen. I guess she was decent enough to tell Jaune. The boy must have a lot of self restraint not to snap which I was guessing he was going to do. But very well, things have said and are cleared up. We'll just have to wait.

Even with the clear up, I can't tell what you got next but you're mixing Canon alongside with the AU of Jaune's family, if I have to make a guess. I don't mind a breather or two. Not everything has to be action packed. Taking things at a slower pace can be fun as well.
Saluut.

I loved it keep up the good work

Unfortunately, I get the feeling you're going to kill Pyrrha off...