Damn this is really good, and while I can see it standing alone as one shot, if you decide to add more to it that can only mean good things. Looking forward to more

Wonderful story! So many swirling emotions. I would love to see more of them!

I love it, because not only r this the only characters I actually remember from the game I think that you wrote their feelings beautifully. I really look forward to reading how they make it through.