This is lovely. I would love to see more like this from you.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkk! THE FEELS OH MY GOSH.
*cough* I can't get enough of these two. There aren't enough fanfiction.

I loved your story. Beautifully written.

The pairing of Shin-Ah and Yona doesn't get nearly as much attention as it deserves. The writing was nice, and the ending sweet. Very good.

I LOVE IT!

So warm and fluffy with a throw-in of Angst. You hardly see much of Shin-Ah fics, a real gem :D

Hi, ~the sun softly smiles~ here! Not logged in on my iPad, but I just wanted to drop a review and thank you for letting me know that you posted this :D

Love your take on Shin-Ah's psyche... Since he rarely speaks, it was great to get into his head with this one-shot. Definitely agree with you about not really having
a natural progression to more mature content - it would have seemed too abrupt for these two, at least to me.

The part where Yona said "Stay" was my favorite. Your description was so well done it was almost like I could see it in my head.

One thing that *wasn't* my favorite was the noodle similie. Idk, I mean, I knew what you were going for, and it was DEFINITELY unique, however... I feel like it kind of took me out of the setting a bit, since it was just *so* different. Noodles boiling / romance to me haha.

But overall, I really enjoyed it. Super sweet :)

I'll definitely be on the lookout for your next update, and if I don't remember to add you to my author alerts next time I log in (which is wont to happen, as I'm sinfully forgetful), I'd much appreciate another pm! :D

At first I was slightly disappointed because you said there wouldn't be any smut. Now I'm kind of happy there isn't any since it would probably just ruin this super cute moment! Angst and fluff - a superb combination. I was seriously grinning like some maniac. Luckily, it is still only 10:16 am so it's still my bed time and no one would come wake me up. Thank God for Spring Break because I don't think I could wait to come back from school to read this. I also conveniently made my parents believe that I always sleep till 11 am (even though I wake either around 8 or 9 and read for the rest of time). I am also looking forward to other fanfictions you've mentioned you're going to write. I love the Hak/Yona ship ! Now that I think of it, I need to continue with the manga. I need to read more chapters otherwise I'll get spoilers and I don't think there's anyone who likes those. Thank you for writing this amazing one-shot. Till next time ! Bye-bye !