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Hey ! I read this on ao3, and I absolutey loved it. So good job ! :D

Gahhh, I can't get over how much I love this. I can't stop rereading.

First of all: wow, I am amazed. Your plot development and storytelling are really good. Until chapter 19 I was not getting, where this was actually going. Since this is really AU I also got along with the characters being very different. You have a talent at detailed describing, and mostly pace as well!
(I read it in one go, and I think around chapter 15 or something I was getting a bit distracted and impatient, cause I could absolutely not feel what the end game was supposed to be)

I was a bit sad though, that Max was portrayed as extremely useless. Despite her mental problems it was hard to feel sympathetic for her around the time she had the fight with Nathan and was a bitch to Warren during the car drive (he might be the bad guy here, but at that time she didn't know, and I was kinda upset at how cold she treated him). Even though she is portrayed as even more distant and shy than in the game, she rarely did anything herself beside freak out or feel stressed, rarely acknowledging those around her with actual words.

phew, this might be considered nitpicking. These aspects just bothered me (while reading, a bit less in retrospective), without them I think the story would have been a fanfiction par excellence!

Please keep up the good, creative work!

Woah loved reading this. Some parts were confusing, like after warrens assault w the knife, it flashes backs. Few years to show us his manipulation. But I thought she just rewound time. Maybe it's just me but I didn't get it until after she woke up in the hospital again and was like ohhh I get it now. But yeah other than that, pretty awesome AU.

It gets on my nerves how obsessed Max is with Chloe

Right so I forgot to comment earlier, but I have to say- THAAANK YOU for this fanfiction. I had a feeling that this is the end but I wasn't sure 'cause I don't understand how works haahh. nevermind, i've had a great time full of feels and this fanfic actually made me like scottfield. XO

Is this the end?! :o

Before I continue reading the rest of your story, let me tell you that this piece is super amazing, easily one of the best fanfiction pieces I've ever read. The diversity of the plotline, the inclusion of a new plot, new and believable characters make this fic an entirely new and even refreshing one. Good on you, fam, and keep up the amazing work!

Back to commenting, yeah. Ahh, last chapters were such a feel trip- but BOI D. I AM SO HAPPY FOR MY SCOTTFIELD BABIES. And fuck you, Warren, God I hate him in this fanfiction, but canon Warren is still my bae XD It's great though that he and Jefferson ended up in jail. Waiting for another chapter asdgdjjdnx

OH MY FUCKING GOD. I can't believe in what happened- waiting for another chapter to make everything cleener in my head

Not gonna lie, I'm kinda curious what Warren was planning on doing once he kidnapped her... :)

OMG I fricking love this story have been waiting so eagerly for the next chapter to come out! Can't wait to continue reading omg love love love

Omg noooo I must read more this is so goood

I still can't tell if this is the right reality or not! XD

Parties bad, Max!