| Reviews for Campione of the Shinju |
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   stylo1 chapter 6 . 9/27 you do realizr every fight can be done inside kamui right and thus causing no damage. |
| stylo1 chapter 5 . 9/27 yes lets seal the pressence of the grimoire instead of using a sealing scroll and dropping into kamui. canon demands it! |
| stylo1 chapter 5 . 9/27 naruto is far to powerfull for these fights to be entertaining or more then one hit kills, you 'fixed' this by making it unneccessarely long dragging things out when they dont need to be chants of endless lenght, hell i dont think naruto cast one real jutsu since coming to this world. basicly you made a fight that shouldnt be there... and thats your story |
| stylo1 chapter 4 . 9/27 he needs to go to school? despite the fact that his only formal education was ninja school he simply picks up again for his age group. yes sharigan and human path sped up his learning but you just said he doesnt understand all that he memorized. so he can skipp like 10 years of schooling but needs to ride out the last 3 years because he needs that diploma, despite the fact he does not had any previous ones other then by use of genjutsu. if you want him to go to school just so you can force some canon down out throats at least make it somewhat believable |
| stylo1 chapter 4 . 9/27 amaterasu doest need any fuel, it will burn for 7 days even underwater |
| stylo1 chapter 3 . 9/27 these endless chants for spells that dont even do a fraction of the damage of some true jutsu is rather pathetic |
| stylo1 chapter 3 . 9/27 damn your english is sloppy, leaving words out forgetting letters and at such times it changes what you are saying |
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 9/27 you forcing naruto into exactly the same position as godou in canon is more then a little unnatural. he makes a clone to stay with shizuka while he goes to fight the god, so ofc he takes along the tablet instead of leaving it woth uis clone or even in his kamui, then like some idiot genin he drops the thing creating the exact same situation as canon. how is that not fake |
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 9/27 heretic gods compared to kayuga as positively puny |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13 You're a cringey motherfucker are you a virgin |
| Shifuru chapter 7 . 6/23 Hope to see more of this story. |
| sayantan2201 chapter 7 . 6/14 A rather intense story (I mean PwP). I really hope you pick this up again when you have the time or feel like it. It was building up nicely. |
| fluffy-fanfic-lover chapter 5 . 4/28 is this dead |
| Shadowuser0112 chapter 7 . 4/25 Why do people abandon the best stories? |
| Primus2021 chapter 7 . 4/5 where can I get an image of Tiamat/Andromeda? I looked on the Campione wikia but she wasn't there. |
