Damn. What a way to end. I feel like this should be further continued. But if you do choose to end it here, my final thoughts would be that it was a fantastic little read. It wasn't long, but it was concise, well paced, and well written. It also pulled off one of the rarest things in the fandom. Being a good 2nd person story.

I rate this 15 cats out of 2 bags of heinz. Definitely worth a read.

Again. I have to say how well you're adding to the characters from the game. Well done

Heyo! Its me. Back at it again with another small review. Mostly because I don't wanna wait before jumping onto the next chapter. Good work with Crane's character, and the overall chapter. See ya next chapter!

I still can't get over the fact that you're actually pulling off an above decent 2nd person story. Also, again, good chapter.

Well written so far. Also, Second person writing! Bold Taff. Very bold.

Having played the game four times, I have to say Crane's character is incredibly well done. And so is the story, especially the attention to details.

Neat, I can't wait for more.