Reviews for Always With You |
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![]() ![]() Wow! I absolutely loved your fic! I started reading it last night, and I literally could not put my phone down (thank god for fanfiction mobile)! I am so glad that Dilly and Ray ended up together! Keep writing, you have a great talent for storytelling :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I read the summery and was thinking it was a sue but in reality it was not even a sue at all. You had plot and his feelings grew for her over time. I don't see why you thought it was a sue. I loved your story. Filled my urge to read. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. This is my second time reading it, and I do believe that the epilogue is new. Love it though! Much better then letting Ray stay on Earth. You are a very good writer, your words come from your heart and you express yourself wonderfully. I am very sorry for all you have lost during the creation of this piece, but I am glad that you are still strong despite it all. Always remember, no matter what is lost, no matter how much the pain, there is always something gained and there is always the promise of future joy. I wish you all the best in everything you do, and I hope that includes continuing to write. Thank you for sharing your story with us, Avey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh this was so good. I loved the whole story every bit of it. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'sliced through her centre' I like that, I like it alot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story! I liked how you portrayed the characters especially Dilandau and Rayana. |
![]() ![]() *horror* how could you? they were so perfect, so beautiful how sould you do that to them! THat is so not right, and not fair and I don't know if i should hate you because i am sitting here crying, but you, you were probably laughing as you wrote it you evil women, I can't believe this! it was beautiful but so terrible, how? |
![]() ![]() show off, lol, i love it! |
![]() ![]() lol that was cute, and romantic and i could see dilandau being mean like that lol |
![]() ![]() oh no, does she die, please tell me she doesn't die |
![]() ![]() i read that janine person's flame. does she know you personally because that was exceptionally mean. flames are constuctive critisim, not presonal attacks |
![]() ![]() oh birthday's now, so much stuff it's amazing |
![]() ![]() very nice |
![]() ![]() first a bar and now sex! |
![]() ![]() a fucking what, tell me! lol |