PLEASE UPDATE SOON! OH MY GOSH LOKI HAS OFFICIALLY BROKEN MY HEART! AND ODIN GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR-! Sorry needed to get that out of my system, but please update soon i can't wait for the next chapter!

so the other day, I was listening to music on YouTube. this song came one, and it was 'Hold On'. of course stupid me didn't pay to much attention to the last a/n, and I was think 'man, this song sounds a lot like something I read.' And I reread last chapter (cause it was good), saw the a/n, and thought to myself 'WOW how thick are you getting?!' also, last chapter gave me hope for Odin. It's gone.

my favorite part of this was the part from Odin's pov

the ending almost made me cryyyyy...

you gotta tell me! what was the reference?!

I am absolutely obsessed with this book! I've literally never felt this many emotions and I cannot wait for the next update! Never stop writing you are amazing! This is exactly what I needed after endgame.

I really liked this chapter, Jane's speech is beautiful and so true!

It's a beautiful chapter that you have written, even if it's very sad

I love this chapter! One thing is for sure, there is a big conflict with Odin, so Loki wants to die more, the more a person is hurt, the more he loses his strength. I would love to see Loki with Thor, that he goes in the evening with him, obviously I still have a lot of trouble to see him stand up. If he goes to the party, I know that drinking alcohol and not eating, is equal to a very big malaise. I knew and it does not do good ... Hâte to read more :)

The loose clothes, it's true that it works well in the winter. Afterwards, the bigger a person is, the more you can see that they lose weight, but some people do not pay too much attention. Seeing that Loki has a brother, there are two children to look after and when one is already discreet, it is true that we ended up noticing this kind of behavior quite late, sometimes even too late. I remember that one day my mother took me to the doctor and I was 33kg, the hospital said I was fine ... Obviously it was wrong, I was 14, I was far from good, it is really uncomfortable that there was finally a reaction. It's sad to get there. I can not wait to read more about Loki.

I am French and I was looking forward to following this story. This story is very touching, in fact it is difficult to talk about this disease, to understand, for my part, I know ... So I understand ... Since the age of 14 I'm sick, I I'm 28, I'm better, but it's a very hard fight. Good luck and look forward to read more.

This fanfiction is very interesting! you write very well I can not wait to read more

Great job so far! This has been my favorite chapter so far. Authors seem to always forget to include some playful nature between the brothers, they love each other! Plus chapters with more interaction between characters seem to be your strong suit. It’s your house of course, but there’s no need to put phrases in bold to try and enhance the intensity, it has the opposite effect actually. But, great story can’t wait to read more and see what you’re planning.

I’m definitely into this story but there’s a huge difference in quality and content between the first and second chapters! Maybe it was more rushed, this one just seemed too fast paced and a little over-the-top reactions from Loki. Sorry if this is a little harsh! Just being honest. I can’t wait to read the rest though!

Aww I hope the next chapter will be out soon! :( I love your writing style and think that those internal thoughts are really realistic! :) although I personally hope for more whump (yeah I know... :D) I hope that this story has eventually a happy end :3