"I'd considered that. You have a suggestion?" - - (feels like this should be "hadn't considered")

doujutsu of the hidden continent

Is this something more or is the "hidden continent" just another name for the continent the elemental nations reside on?

face otherwise remaining stolen, even - - remaining still

the face can't be scene, and - - be seen,

Wasn't Battleworld already brought up? With the same "there is a "Leah" there"?

building ther that makes - - there

tempting that is too him - - to him

"Is it now." - - now?" (maybe)

"It's because the brain doesn't stop developing until twenty-five, and is still sensitive to damage from alcohol before that age,"

I'm 80% sure that no such thing was considered when they created that law.

with your Hokage," - - Hokage."

about the Kyuubi attack. - - attack.)

"How did you survive?" Mikoto asks, "and why has - - And why or survive," Mikoto asks, "and

Hizashi's afterdeath certificate - - after-death ("afterdeath" is only a movie thing?) (unless you have already used this later on...)

or at least pretending too. "More - - pretending to.

Wait. Would Mikoto and Fugaku go to Hel because they die with "self sacrifice" "suicide"?

which should probablyhappen somewhere - - probably happen

Loki, no.

Oh shit! How is Mikoto going to act when she finds out Leah is really the goddess of death.

Nice stuff, good assembly of team. Walking stories in various incarnations are fun.

That was awesome. So awesome. I seriously love how you had her entrance.

Hey there, nice to meet everyone.
Just wanted to ask, is "Only half the time" abandoned? I really like that story and kinda dissapointed it seems to be frozen.
Have a great day!

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)