Really good!

OH MY GOD THE FEELS
This was fantastic, I thought the characterization of Emma was superb. I am off to go see what else you've written because this was just incredible!

This is one of the best Underworld fics I have ever read. It definitely captures Emma perfectly, and Killian as well. I hope this goes down just like this.

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Thank you for the happy ending I hope will happen. But will Liam be such a judgmental, bossy jerk?

THANKS FOR MAKING ME CRY. AGAIN. i'm never going to get over just how amazing this is, even though it breaks my heart. also that authors note!(yeah i freak out over your authors notes) you're completely right about emma and i know you were freaking out a bit about posting this masterpiece of a fic(seriously it's some of the best stuff ever written) but it's SO GOOOOD.

i sobbed all over again over emma not feeling good enough(again), how she runs away (again) and all she wants is the approval of the man who means so much to the man she loves. the fact that spilling a glass and sleeping in a car is just another reminder of when the same things happened when she was alone. it's so sad that she's so used to feeling this way. (also i had no idea frenetically was a word I'M SO SORRY and embarrassed i'm just going to go hide in my room.)

poor emma. i feel david's anger so much.

'She's not the one content on leaving him behind, after everything. She's not the one who promised he'd survive, who promised that she'd never leave him, who told him she wasn't like Neal or Graham or Walsh.' HE SAID HE WAS A SURVIVOR SANDY I WANT A REFUND.

'It's the perfect shelter for people without homes, anyway.' cut my heart out with a spoon it'll hurt less.

WHEN THEY WERE CUDDLING IN THE CAR HE JUST WANTS TO HOLD HER Szhwxvwtxzwe(I'M SO SORRY i got it wrong yesterday i blame the angst OKAY) and they love each other so much and and anddddd i'm in the underworld because i'm DEAD.

WHY IS SHE SO HARD ON HERSELF & WHEN WILL SHE EVER GET A BREAK I'M SO EMOTIONAL.

it was so sad reading that part about emma not feeling like a good mother or daughter. but she is and i'm in pain :(

'Always an orphan and always alone.' i'm never speaking to you again.

Dgeidbewbhdheu i'm sorry for not even leaving a decent review, but even though i cried a dozen times this was wonderfully well written and you deserve a million hugs.

I think you got everyone spot on. Don't worry introspection always seems more melodramatic than straight action. Great job. I am so looking forward to seeing Liam again, he definitely had flaws in the short time we saw him (he did kill himself by accident to make a point!) You got his pompous character just right.

YOU MADE ME CRY OH MY GOD I AM SO EMOTIONAL I CAN'T EVEN

What I'd give for this to happen on the show! Wonderful story!

This is a bloody masterpiece! I'm just blowed away right now! When I watch the promo, i wanted to see something exactly like you wrote, about the " not be enough for anybody" thing. You just read in my mind. I just hoped that it was at over but, I'm glad that you wrote it. It's amazing!
Anna

Omg you made me cry. I hardly ever cry bc of fics! This was so beautiful and poignant and freaking amazing. This really is a beautiful piece and I hope that Sunday's ep will be exactly like this.

Beautifully written

Lovely. This is an accomplishment, in tackling a sensitive subject and succeeding. As you noted, Liam was the pinnacle of all things good and right for Killian. So to see a difference of opinion when they are finally reunited is heartbreaking. Emma was excellent. She ran and she filled her head with the pain of her past, questioning her parents, her relationship with Regina. She would, because she hasn't had a sustaining and affirming presence in her life. Killian and she haven't been together long enough to put the nightmares to rest. Until he makes his decision. Thanks for writing.

I'm crying! This was beautiful! You were so on point with what was going on in Emma's mind and how she feels. So on point! This is one of my favorite speculation fics for 5x15! Love how you write!

Well, I don't think there are enough tissues in the world to save me now. Farewell.

But oh my gosh this was so amazing and I applaud you-you got all of Emma's feelings spot on.
:)