This wasn't as bad as you made it out to be, I do think it needed at least a epilogue though. I want to know how his job and life changed.

yeah. not as refined as your later work. but a very good story.

I genuinely thought that this book was gonna be bad from what i read at the beginning when in reality its really good. Dont diss yourself upplet.

Wow, you haven't updated this story in a long time! I'm impressed!

Why is it nick who always gets injured in almost every story, but not that bitch, judy?

Only at part 3, just hope I won't find out that Nick does what too many injured people do, push away their family/friends.

good story and I would like to see where u like to go with it

Well though the story was short, I still liked the Fanfiction.
It had it's dramatic parts and that's good for a story.
My hope is that either you will continue the story or mark it as complete.
Thanks again for another good but brief story

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!

please add more chapters soon as possible

good story

You know, this was one of the FIRST Zootopia fanfics I read!

I understand about getting busy; just take your time

I loved this story it is one of my favorites so far

Are you going to continue this story?

This was an incredible short story! I was fearful the whole time, I honestly wasn't sure how you were going to end this. Its a bitter sweet end and these are my favorite kind of endings! this, this, this was just a great way to start my reading day!