Okay Shitshow, let's see what you did wrong with this story. Just the very concept of this story alone earns you a big FUCK YOU. A "water" "princess" really? That is the DUMBEST scapegoat I have ever heard of. Oh and you just so happened to throw in that dumb old cliche of a love triangle. How mediocre. I read the other chapters for this and it just sort of screams virgin. In short your story is a waste of space

Learn to fucking write loser

Is there going to be a sequel or no

Great to see you continuing your story even after three years. Might recommend that you make the chapters longer and the scene changes longer in between so it doesn't become hectic or don't any changes at all. Other than that, great chapters!

Still waiting on the love triangle between finn flame princess and water princess.

Still waiting for the drama between flame princess and water princess.

Love the story although it had sort if drifted off from the point of the story which is the water princess.

great story i love it but quick question does it follow the show n when u get the chance i hope u make the next chapter.

You Finnaly update the story great!

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I guess PB remains too old for Finn and FP doesn't forgive Finn strong enough to date again :/

dude I love this fic please continue

Interesting