Reviews for The Water Princess
He-Haw chapter 1 . 5/28/2019
Okay Shitshow, let's see what you did wrong with this story. Just the very concept of this story alone earns you a big FUCK YOU. A "water" "princess" really? That is the DUMBEST scapegoat I have ever heard of. Oh and you just so happened to throw in that dumb old cliche of a love triangle. How mediocre. I read the other chapters for this and it just sort of screams virgin. In short your story is a waste of space

Learn to fucking write loser
brandonleewolfe1 chapter 1 . 5/3/2019
Is there going to be a sequel or no
tabasco571 chapter 11 . 4/29/2019
Great to see you continuing your story even after three years. Might recommend that you make the chapters longer and the scene changes longer in between so it doesn't become hectic or don't any changes at all. Other than that, great chapters!
Kingkong101 chapter 14 . 12/14/2017
Still waiting on the love triangle between finn flame princess and water princess.
Kingkong101 chapter 13 . 10/6/2017
Still waiting for the drama between flame princess and water princess.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/1/2017
Love the story although it had sort if drifted off from the point of the story which is the water princess.
Rocierra chapter 11 . 9/29/2017
great story i love it but quick question does it follow the show n when u get the chance i hope u make the next chapter.
Kingkong101 chapter 11 . 9/17/2017
You Finnaly update the story great!
ChortugaHiedrasaurioQuemagarto chapter 1 . 10/6/2016
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NinTOONdo chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
I guess PB remains too old for Finn and FP doesn't forgive Finn strong enough to date again :/
mrenteria99 chapter 5 . 4/10/2016
dude I love this fic please continue
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
Interesting