It was a shorter chapter but a good one. I am happy to see you continuing this story!

I freakinglove this fic. The feels are on point. I love your writing style and the originality of the story idea. Their relationship is growing in a beautifuly but not to slow or fast pase.

I Love this book! When will the next chapter be out?

Are you okay? ’Cause you’ve been gone for a bit. Of course, I understand if your job has to do with - you know. Anyway, I hope you stay well and safe, and don’t forget to rest.

I hope you’ll update soon, but if not, I’ll understand.

You’re a brilliant writer!

This is great! Please update soon, though I understand if you don’t have much time. Can you at least put up notices every now and then so as to reassure us you’re still there and will continue the story? Please? Thank you!

So, I hope Kieran can be in Ravenclaw - but I told you that already - and also that he’s birthday is in May, say - May 15. Then I think Clarice can find out about Harry being abused, and she tells Kieran about it, and is all spiteful see - then Kieran gets angry, because his mom had always been so good to him, and he can’t imagine her like this, laughing about a kid abused by Muggles. So maybe he can confront Harry, and apologize or something, and perhaps start a friendship of sorts with his half brother. And then maybe Clarice will accept Harry ... !

Hey, can Kieran be in Ravenclaw? I don’t want him in Slytherin, because he worships the House. And did I say I want his birthday to be in May? Do you think you could fit it into your story? Thanks!

Hi, could you tell me when Kieran’s birthday is? I hope it’s in May. Please?

Please update soon! I love “The Unwanted One.”

I love this story, really I do! This is the best ever! I was afraid you’d be like some people - start brilliantly, and then ... leave it. Thankfully, you’re not. You’ll update again soon.

Brilliant story! It shows so much emotion. I hope Clarice gets lost or eaten by a Basilisk. I'm not sure what your plan is for Kieran, but I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue, simply brilliant!

Love this story keep it up! ️

More please

Finally! Thanks for the update, no matter how short this may be! Congrats on your graduation! Take care and stay safe! Thank you for all your help as a frontliner!

It's been a while since I came to check the fics I follow in fanfiction but every time I do, I always check yours. So it was nice to see an update.
We finally had the closure to the whole memories debacle (or well, maybe? I mean finally Severus and Harry have seen them and talked about it a little!)
And them interacting more is always good.
As always, they are beliavable as characters (although I can't say if they are out of characters, after reading so many fics, it's kind of turns into a flexible thing XD, but I didn't feel weird reading them (sometimes they are so out of character that they trip alarms kind of).

The chapter itself was nice :3 and your writing as good as always.
I just hope we don't have to wait too long for the next one. My country is in quarantine and every update to any good fic I follow is good hahahah.
Kudos!

Hope you're well. When are you going to write further. I absolutely loved the tale. Even though it lacked a few of my favourite characters which I wanted in Harry's childhood still it's beautiful. A beautiful story.