Reviews for Never Give Up On Us |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is great really touching |
![]() ![]() AlienHeart of darkness: Well, the waterfall thing is a bit cliché, but to this point what isn't, right? (Shrug) good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAHHH THIS IS GREAT AND I WAS CRYING AND AAAHHH TOO CUTE |
![]() ![]() I have to say, this was a pretty good one-shot for your first kfp story. But... I think that you could make a chapter story to show instances of Po giving Tigress gift, and Tigress second guessing her and Po being in a relationship. Another chapter could be when Po and the rest of the five left for the mission, another can be a chapter of Po join up in the Jade Palace and surprisin the five and Shifu. Another chapter could be a a flash of what had happened to Po in his POV. And there could be an epilogue. Also, I do have to say that I did see that Po was going to come back, as I have seen way too many kfp stories of where Po "dies" and then it turns out he is still alive. To me it would have been a plot twist if he did not come back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaaaaaah plot twist. That got me good. Good story btw. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For your first KFP fanfic, it was amazing! |