jaja amelia metio la pata pero nick en serio ja escapar de un conejo decidido y super rapido que además nunca se rinde ejem ya perdiste jaja

jajaja estos dos espero que judi vaya tras ese zorro suyo jaja

Please continue this story, I am enjoying the three way interaction with the ZBI guy butting into it.
If you need help with editing, look me up.

Uhm... Nick used sign in the movie, so I think he knows it.
Interesting story so far.

Interesting start, I just want to point out that Cheetahs are not of the Panthera family, and can't breed with a tiger, there DNA is just too differnt. They have trouble enough breeding with themselves it seems. I know this is scientific stuff and Zootopia is fiction, but that world uses reality to play in. I would have made her with two Panthera family cats like a leopard and tiger known as a ligar, that would have felt more believable and not jarred me out of the story.
Still, good start, going to read more now.
Thank you for your time.

UPDATE PLEASE!

That last part was brilliant! Please update soon.

I'm on chapter 3 and YAS I LOVE IT SO FAR BUT...

A common thing I see on fanfiction is the whole romantic idea. A lot of times people will put "o but does character A really like character B?" I know you can't really change your writing an I'm not asking you to at all lol, but just a tip, try not to rush the romance. The journeys better than the destination and all of that, heh.

BUT THERE ARE MORE PROS TO THE STORY THAN CONS AND I LOVE THE IDEA YOU HAVE SO IMMA KEEP READING AND YOU'LL KEEP WRITING HEHEH

Finally Nick caught on. Nice chapter.

yay! they patched things up..buried the hatchet! FINALLY!

Glad to see they made up :)

You ended it like that on purpose. This isn't going to end well.

So far a nice story, but so far too short. And the last chapter ended pretty much in the middle of action-ish thing. How am I supposed to sleep peacefully when there is unresolved stuff? (that means I cant wait for more)

I would usually just read the whole story and then comment on the whole, but this time, I am going to make and exception. I have two things that I just need to say:

First - I like ... scratch that ... I love that you have provided Celsius as well as that other crap unit of measurement.

Second - please format to block, that centre formatting looks ... I will be generous and say that it looks hideous.

Maybe there is a spy in either the ZPD or the ZBI. I think there is is a spy in their mists.