Good start. Can't wait to read more.

Cupids arrow, the feels hit a bullseyes through my heart

Cool

(T~T)! For all the broken hearted!

unoriginal and overdone plot.

I'm left wondering if Tori will be able to open up and talk thngs out with Jade, if jade will be able to talk things out and understand Tori, and if they can find their way back together. I'm watching to see what happens when they do get their chance to just open up. But first, will Tori make Jade hurt in return for what the other girl did to her? And is the lonely boy related to Jade. You know, cause of the blue eyes.

Tori sure is filled with pain and Jade has to see that first in order for things to be fixed properly.

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Im about to cry bruh

You broke my heart, so I think you have to put it together XD thank I will be waiting for more.

Not a good moment for Jade...
Thanks for the chapter, you keep writing and I'll keep reading :)

I really hope this continues :) update soon

Jade learned too little too mate to not make assumptions because it's cost her big time, but I sure hope she can fix things with Tori.

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so far, interesting beginning. Lets see where this goes.