I'm intrigued with how the story is and will progress. I like how the characters are protrayed and how the scenes flow. I look forward to reading more of this creative, awesome story.

I think that the mature content was written in a tastefully heated manner.

Wonderful chapter. The close intimacy that Dean and Jayne had as friends was charming and beautiful. Their first kiss was magnificent.

How sad for Jayne to keep that a secret for so long, but I'm glad that she revealed it to Dean.

Interesting developments within this chapter. The OC Hamlet plot twist was great.

Poor Jayne! Poor Dean! Heartbreaking. I like how the OC adds to the story.

Loved it. I like how smoothly Jayne has been inserted into canon events. I like the slowburn if Dean and Jayne.

I enjoyed reading this introductory chapter. Great story premise. I liked how this chapter laid a backstory by showing scenes at different points in time. I like Jaynie and the bond she has made with the boys and Bobby. Heartbreaking about her Mom, but a needed plot point.

I been binging this since like over a hour ago haha.
But if I have this correctly you mentioned around chapter 2-3? One of those in the authors not that this is a story where he doesn’t go to hell? Unless I totally read that wrong so curious to see what ends up happening because if I’m correct if he doesn’t someone ends up doing something to avoid it.

Anyways can’t wait for more! This is really good :)

Yay! I'm so glad that they're together. Can't wait read more!

Just want you to know you do a wonderful job with your writing, you find a way to get a lot of the story line without using excessive chapters, not that it's bad when people do, it just makes getting to the heart and soul take a bit more. But I do enjoy your style and creativity. Keep up the good work. Much love.

Just finished reading chapter 4. Holy. Shit. This is such a good story! You’re so damn creative! Thank you for writing this. I honestly cannot wait to see what the heck is gonna happen.

I can’t believe you don’t have more reviews. This is a really, really cool story so far. It’s completely different from what I’ve read so far, which is exciting. You’re an awesome writer! I can’t wait to read more.

Hi! Just found your story! I gotta say this is really fucking good, I love your writing style and the story so far, so please keep doing your magic! I’m an addict! - Nicole.

Interesting so far! I'm curious as to what you'll change and what you'll keep the same, so update when you can.