| Reviews for Jaune of Cainhurst |
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   PasiveNox chapter 8 . 5/3/2019 great great nice |
| PasiveNox chapter 7 . 5/3/2019 very nice |
| PasiveNox chapter 6 . 5/3/2019 how nice |
| PasiveNox chapter 5 . 5/3/2019 great nice |
| PasiveNox chapter 4 . 5/3/2019 hohohohho nice |
| PasiveNox chapter 3 . 5/3/2019 great great |
| PasiveNox chapter 2 . 5/3/2019 he very nice |
| PasiveNox chapter 1 . 5/3/2019 great |
| tylerbraden13 chapter 8 . 3/23/2019 should update |
| Little Liar chapter 8 . 2/23/2019 It could be better. |
| snowyassas1n chapter 5 . 12/16/2018 Ughhhh badass backstory and of course he is going to do his best to hide it...just to fit in with canon I guess? Also you do know Ozpin announces their full names when he assings the teams don't you or are you deliberately glossing over this to not ruin the announcement chapter you seem to be going for. |
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 8 . 8/22/2018 huh. |
| ExS-DrIfTeRr chapter 8 . 8/14/2018 Any chance of this continuing? Its a really good story |
| Ecclipse chapter 1 . 8/8/2018 V Lmao that comment is so mad geez. Mate of you think you can do better go ahead and try, it's easy to judge someone when you're not the experiencing their situation. |
| DeepWound78 chapter 4 . 8/5/2018 Nice job being a terrible writer unable to come up with his own ideas by giving Jaune his canon weapons when he's from Cainhurst instead of, I don't know, the Cainhurst weapons!? Seriously, that was probably the most pathetic weapon choice you could have gone with and you went and did it. You could have used the Chikage, the Rakuyo, that rapier that turns into a gun, or the big ass blood mace. Or any of the other Hunter weapons. Shit, you could have made one up, like two swords that can fuse into a glaive or have the two blades become a bit ass rifle. Wow, that took me all of 5 minutes to imagine, you must be a really terrible author. I'm gonna keep reading simply cause it's hard to find a RWBY story that's Jaune centric and makes him competent at fighting, with good grammar and spelling, but I'm not gonna be surprised if this story turns out to be a flaming pile of dog shit. |
