No...just no, she sleeps with another guy and hurts Chat for a year, ignores him and snaps at him even directly tells him she slept with someone else despite knowing his feelings for her. And he just takes it and "oh still love you my lady"
NO. She can very much go fuck herself. She doesn't deserve Adrien, nor his love or loyalty.

boring

so long!

PLEASE UPDATE OR MAKE A SEQUEL!

I really enjoyed this story and think the story line was great! There are grammatical errors but a bit of proof reading (you could enlist a beta reader on here if you didn’t want to take the time yourself) would fix those right up! My only suggestion with the layout of the story is with the flashbacks maybe shorten them up a bit. Since the flashbacks are from another part of this story when you do a flash back instead reentering the whole original scene you could easily shorten it to a quick summary to refresh the reader’s memory of that part and then continue with the added parts you add in to the flashback. Also maybe write the flashbacks in a different font that way they stand out more. And I absolutely LOVE the way this story ended. Super cute!

Plagg is my fricken spirit animal

KILL HIM

I meant beverage my finger slipped to the post review button before I could correct and finish my sentence, anyways I think Marinette would have some difficulty finishing a whole bottle right away. While I know the legal drinking age in Paris (in Europe) is 18 I don't thing they drink as hard as some Americans do, probably drinking a bit of wine here and there.

Your story sucked, it made no sense time wise as you kept going back and forth between events. Your spelling was about as bad as a first grader's spelling. Your whole writing technique was just terrible. I can find plenty mistakes for every chapter and your writing is so non-descriptive. You also can't seem to get characters right, your portrayal of each person is not even close to how they would really act even if they are aged up. An example is how canon wise Marinette seems like the type of girl who would wait for marriage or at least wait for until a long while until she chooses to participate in sexual intercourse, she also seems like the type of girl who would rarely drink. Also thinking logically, and knowing that a bottle of snapps is a very strong alcoholic beverahe

*screeches only dogs can hear* I LOVE IT

WEEE WOO WEE WOO WEE WOO RAPE ALERT RAPE ALERT WEE WOO WEE WOO RAPE ALERT RAPE ALERT

Awwwwwwww! I LOVE IT! That was the best ending to any story ever! Favorite thing: becuase he went back in tme she didn't lose her virginity to someone other than Adrien!

Amazing stuff please make a sequel!

Shit

SR