Reviews for Neverland
pgsca chapter 46 . 9/13/2019
I know you haven't updated in a while but I just found this story and I wanted to say I hope you continue it someday. There's really nothing else I've seen like it. Hope everything's well with you.
Guest chapter 18 . 10/3/2018
Dear old Dumbledore kidnapped two children putting their parents in agony... and are we supposed to root for him?
The Potters knew, Macgonnagal knew, Sirius knew. Bunch of assholes. This said, the story is interesting and I get it's complicated for the new family but I'd like to see some people being punished for their evil deeds. Kidnapping, for instance?
SiriuslyPink chapter 1 . 4/6/2018
Interesting premise, but I do NOT like the idea of Harry having a supposed OC twin (at least, that’s what I gathered from the information in this chapter)
zsimmons14 chapter 46 . 3/22/2018
This story is fab!
Just finished it and really hoping you’ll update again!
Love all the characters relationships with each other, Narcissa is fabulous! Hope you’ll bring Lucius back!
blinddivinity chapter 17 . 10/18/2017
Great fic.
Question: how will Draco be treated when he goes back to school by his housemates (are there no concerns over that)?

Great fic.
Ceies chapter 46 . 7/25/2017
Poor Harry. But Remus and Narcissa are gold. I secretly wish i had an uncle like Remus. He's so nice and really tries to be helpful. And yes. Hopefully Draco will really bond with Harry. I thought it was a bit unfair of harry to immediately assume the worst of him, when they had that conflict with Snape.
Anyway, I'm really hoping for news of Lucius every chapter, naturally.
I have to admit, I'm only itching to have this rather peaceful and quiet bonding time in Hogwarts and the Grimauldplace be over, and the war actually start. It's dragging on a bit to much for my taste :D but do as you like. It's your story after all, and still awesome. And you do have a lot of characters who really have to find some common ground and bonding time.

greetings, Ceies
FlowerChild23 chapter 15 . 7/11/2017
Holy cow
LadyMalfoy303 chapter 46 . 7/10/2017
Such a beautiful chapter! Thank for
Hearing my pleas haha I love Narcissa. Please update soon, this fic is awesome.
azerty29 chapter 46 . 7/10/2017
Hi I just wanted to say that I am absolutely in love with your story. I love the idea of Harry being a Malfoy and your story is by far the best I have read on that topic. Thank you for writing it !
Shellie2 chapter 46 . 7/9/2017
Nathan is interesting but I am glad you shifted back to Harry for a bit. Honestly, he may have been through the most in life but it seems to me that should make him the one that needs protection. Nathan and Draco grew up knowing they were loved. Harry acts like could take it or leave it but its a front. And its not realistic for him to just hold it together so well. In one way, he is actually the youngest even if its not in age. I hope that makes sense.
PadyandMoony chapter 45 . 6/27/2017
I like this story. I think you are doing a wonderful job with the complexity of how things have changed. I do however have a criticism, well, basically, when I see a summary where Harry gets a family I expect that finally someone will be protecting him and yet, every time in your story where Harry seems to be put in danger the protective reaction from people is regarding Nathan, how whatever is going on affects Nathan. This very issue with Snape. Reading McGonnagall's reaction it seemed that if Nathan hadn't been affected she might have been upset about sending a child as bait but she surely wouldn't do anything to stop it. Maybe it's not you intention. But considering Harry's history,, both with the Dursleys and at Hogwarts, after that conversation, I can easily see him understanding exactly that, and worse, that he needs to antecipate himself so Nathan wouldn't be in danger. I can totally see him going to the Ministry to be bait by himself.

So my question is, did you mean for Nathan to be the main character? Because as is, that's how your story is coming out as. Maybe you should put a notice up on the summary, so people know not to start reading this as a Harry gets a family story.

Otherwise, good work.
Navyangel85 chapter 45 . 6/26/2017
Hmmmmm
BooksAreMyVideogames chapter 4 . 6/26/2017
Personally, I would think Narcissa would have more taste than to use black in a bedroom. Moss green would blend quite nicely with a soft bronze.
LadyMalfoy303 chapter 45 . 6/25/2017
Pleaseeeeeeeeee more narcissa
Dawn chapter 44 . 6/17/2017
Hi, this story has been great, and I am really hoping that you update it at some point. How you portray the familial relations is particularly good.
- Dawn (sorry about not logged in, I dont have an account)
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