Reviews for The Flame Burns in Two |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is lovely but PLEASE, fix your spelling. You used "your" instead of "You're" so many times and it's giving me a headache. |
![]() ![]() "You really mean that?" she asked the cage she was rapped in slowly disappeared as if to prove a point. When the cage was gone a strange feeling of acceptance came over Dark Bloom. I need this so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
![]() ![]() I guess my only real criticism of this story is how the trix essily stole the water stars. |
![]() ![]() Hmmm I wonder how getting Enchantix this early will affect the rest of the story |
![]() ![]() Omg this was a great chapter XD |
![]() ![]() Havent read the rest of the story yet but I hope Ruby will help Bloom defeat Valtor |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I woυld coυnт вecaυѕe вaѕιcally Rυвy ιѕ lιĸe Blooм'ѕ child |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Roxy:) |
![]() ![]() THIS ABSOLUTELY MADE MY DAY! I cannot believe the story had already ended! It was just a short time ago that I've discovered and loved this story. Anyway, please work quickly on the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me when the sequel is released. |
![]() ![]() This is getting really good. I hope it will turn into a happy ending. Anyway, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my my my! Love this and hope for an update soon! |
![]() ![]() This is seriously a great chapter! Ruby's gonna kill Valtor...lol. Anyway, hope you can update soon :) |