Reviews for Shifting Fundamentals
lucel18 chapter 1 . 11/30/2018
Lol! love the heart-to-heart talks that these two have that doesn't seem farfetched at all. Thank you!
CarVie16 chapter 1 . 4/1/2018
This was both funny and adorable. The banter feels so much like the real Leonard and Sara. Some of my favorites parts were 82.7% and the marriage metaphor.

Ice puns. I love ice puns. Snow joke... I mean, no joke. XD

"Physical activity" oh I see what you did there. Another reason why it's so funny.
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
This is absolutely excellent. Your dialogue was entertaining as hell and your characterizations were brilliant. Loved it!
Sophmounty chapter 1 . 5/29/2017
I am amazed by your writing skills for this ship of captain cold and white canary. This fic is my favourite for this pairing so far... And I've read alot of them. Please keep writing amazing fanfics.
MissCrazyWriter321 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
This is probably my favorite one-shot in the entirety of Legends of Tomorrow fanfiction. It's perfectly in character, perfectly written, perfectly paced... I love it. You have a real talent for writing these characters, and for writing in general. Absolutely everything I've read by you, I can picture in my head perfectly. I've been meaning to review your stuff for awhile, but I just haven't gotten around to it. (I'm still worming on actually reviewing every thing I read.) That said, I wanted to make sure I got all of them, so, even though I read strictly on AO3 now, I wanted to run back here and review this one. My evening is about to get hectic, but keep your eyes open on AO3 over the next few days. I'll be working my way through your stories.
fandomflier15 chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
This was beautiful, absolutely perfect. So much meaning and depth but plenty of humor and fliff. I loved it!
crazygirlne chapter 1 . 2/26/2017
Oh, this was fantastic!

"Actually, it's bigger by four square feet. In any event, since you've decided to stick around a while longer, it looks like I'll have to put my plans –" he pauses to send her a meaningful look "– on ice."

That was perfect on so many levels that I had to copy it here, and then it just kept getting better. I love the end and the fact they don't even react to " I love this side of you well every side of you" ahhhh and just 3
Write-To-You chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
BEAUTIFUL! Positively BEAUTIFUL! I loved that :)
Write-To-You
BrattyLittleAngel chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
Totally love the way you write Snart and Sarah. Think I am addicted to your stories.
nightkitty555 chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
I love your Snart dialogue, especially near the beginning. I can just hear him saying that.
Waifine chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
You write them SO WELL. I just... I CAN'T. The banter, the nonchalance, the PUNS. I am just completely overjoyed by how well you write Snart and Sara. Also, I love the way you always manage to interject Mick with his complaints about it being over a week since Snart had committed an actual crime, etc. Please, PLEASE, write a story about Snart coming back after the events of Destiny. In whatever scenario you see fit. I feel that no one could do it better than you.
DemonUntilDeath chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
The dialogue in this story is brilliant! Especially the bit where Len seriously asks what she's done to him! Great story!
theladypantera chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
I'm a new watcher and admirer of Wentworth Miller aka Captain Cold. After being introduced to him on the flash and enjoying him even more on Legends of Tomorrow I discovered he was the star of Prison Break and now I'm totally addicted to that AWESOME show, so surprising because I don't usually watch 'prison' shows, but this one is so worth it! Anyways, since discovering this oh so sexy and beautiful man, I've been trying to find some good fanfic, ANY fanfic about him (I didn't even care which show it was for as long as it was with Mr. Miller lol) and WOW has that been a challenge! This was the VERY FIRST piece of writing that I came across (after much searching) that I felt was a truly sensational piece of writing! The way you write Cold, your details, your descriptions are just spot on! You told your story and I was THERE! Totally drawn in and compelled you brought the characters to life, the dialogue was wonderful! good job! Great job actually! And I LOVE the present tense you use in your writing, it is very challenging to do but when done well is a much more satisfying way to read a story imho :) Anyways, I just had to tell you how much I enjoyed your story and its high quality.

However if I could make any suggestion (which is tough cause this story is written so damn well!) it would be to perhaps find a way to reword some of the statements you make in (parenthesis) so that the brackets are removed and you read it like a natural sentence as much as possible. I understand there are moments when you want and need the (effect) of the parenthesis in writing, it can even make a statement more powerful, but when overused can sometimes seem tiresome or too repetitive. There were a few instances where you could have reworked the wording so that the brackets weren't really needed that way when you DO use them, they are more effective - imho- and just a thought :) like I said, wonderful, wonderful story! you are obviously a very talented writer. I hope you've written more (cause i haven't checked yet, lol.) Thanks again! wonderful writing! Keep it up! ~ Lady P.
DHE212 chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
Love it very much. Well written
The-Red-Lip chapter 1 . 5/9/2016
Great job with this story!
I love it so much!
It's my new favourite
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