that speach is getting old ... how often are you going to repeat it ?

tsukoyomi is overkill ... it's like using an s class jutsu to finish someone off who has no arms or legs and is 90% dead ... a normal genjutsu would have been more then enough

it's implied in the manga that awakening the mangekyo gives the user instinctive knowledge of what it can do ...

yeah for that interference of rene in the lee fight ... the jonins would interfere before rene could use amaterasu ... this feels way too forced

well if orochimaru didn't plan anything extra rene would be terribly bored during the invasion...

THE TEN-TAILS HAS BEEN REVIVED! OOOH BOY!

Hmm, this is not badly written style wise, good structure, easy to read and follow, some decent wordplay, some details here and there that help the world feel bigger and more solid.
So yeah, I can't say anything against the core elements here.
But ... for crying out loud, what are people name Rene or Camille doing in a universe based around japanese culture? How hard is it to use a japanese name?
This is a major flaw. One of the key elements of introducing an original character is to make sure he feels like he belongs in the story, that is a part of the universe. And if something as crucial as the characters name doesn't fit, well, that is a major problem. The character stands out like a sore thumb and not in a good way.
Also, Rene strikes me as a character that has traits of a Mary Sue. Sorry, I can't say for sure from just one chapter, but ... signs are there, because, well, I can't say anything fundamentally bad about her. I mean I could name negative traits of every canon character from the first time I saw them, they in general have more negative traits than positive, but Rene, umm, not so much. Feels like a stereotype of a good guy type of character.
So, well, this might be a good story when the plot and writing style come into play. But the original characters feel more like self inserts than actual characters.

OMG! Kushina, Camilla, AND Samuel are back! Awesome! Looking forward to the next chapter!

You know as a Phoenix sage he could probably regenerate his arm and eyes... just saying, they come back from the dead, what’s a limb compared to that.

So just an FYI but Hinata has both fire and lightning chakra affinities.

Whoooo! Awesome chapter!

Ahh man I love Madara so much he's my fav villain like I see him in my mind do you wanna dance hahaha

NOOOOOOOO WHYYYYY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE IT PHOENIX CONTRACT ITS SO CLICHE GODDAMIT MINUS 2 POINTS

LMAO at this goofy self-insert/Gary Stu. You should just rename the OC to your real name, unless Rene is your real name.

Ok I think your getting a little ahead of yourself with Julia you've already made her low to mid chunin that's way to strong for a few months of training. You're making her into a super prodigy that's eclipsing people like kakashi, Itachi and even minato they didn't even graduate the academy until they were at least 6 you've got Julia at chunin level at 4 that's ridiculously over powered for a 4 year old who hasn't even had a full year of training yet. By the rate your going she's going to be a kage level kunoichi by 7. I might've been able to accept chunin level by the end of the 3 year training trip (becuase Rene is strong enough to get her there by then) but chunin level after a couple of months is way to fast a growth rate.