Great one!

:)

Absolutely amazing story! Loved that Sev and Harry were fighting FOR each other rather than fighting WITH each other. Somehow reminded me of LIES BENEATH THE SURFACE by Nyx. Thank you:)

Nice

loved it!

Lovely! So damn sweet! I had no choice, to stop reading was just no option. Well, how needs sleep? I certainly do not. ;-)

Wow, that was just ... (searching for the suitable word) AMAZING! So far I love all of your stories. This one was no exeption. Thank you and never stop writing.

love it. especially the note at the end.

Cock. Dick. Penis. You can say it you know, instead of the repetitive description of 'burning passion' or 'spear', spear did make me giggle though... I have so many puns running through my head xD
I'm sorry to say the writing of your sex scenes was more comical to me then passionate.
Buuut other then that I did enjoy your story, the relationship progression between Harry and Severus was believable. Similarly could be said to how the friendship came about, instead of some comically obscure event happening to force them into proximity of each other, their relationship came from time and understanding which I quite liked seeing within the story.

This story was great! That note at the end was terribly snarky but still amusing. Loved the whole thing :)

Loved it

The sex scenes leave a lot to be desired but over all not a bad story

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaawwwwwwawwwwwwwwwwwwww! This Severus is absolutely adorable in his care for Harry.

An interesting take on perception versus reality. This may have been stronger without the sexual content.

Okay, I'm really just going through all your fics at this point. Again, I loved this. I enjoyed watching them furvently deny that anything was happening even while they both wanted more to be happening. I loved how sure Harry was that Severus wouldn't want him - and how very wrong he was. I also loved that when they did finally get together it was the same as their dreams. Great job - and I loved the sequel just as much. ;)