Interesting story you brewed up here. I still can'take see where you want to book with the two major plot lines you started here between Judy and Nick and how they are connected.

Still a lot of questions remain unanswered and beckon to be answered. Also a little if background between end of the movie and now seems still to be missing.

If continued in the same detail as the current 12 chapters, you have an interesting and binding book on your hands, I am looking forward to explore .. pending it gets continued with the story's state not updated for am ist half a year.

Anyhow, thanks for sharing!

Noice

Well...This, and at least 3 other stories are determined to give me nightmares for the next...Year...Gad damns it. Ah well, I think I'll enjoy the fun then!

I'm really liking Leonard! Patiently waiting for more.

Well Thursday is my last exam, so perfect timing for me! Something to enjoy afterward. )

I've been pretty obsessive over this fandom recently, so there aren't many fics I haven't read at this point - and this has just rocketed up to become my (joint) favourite. I must confess, I haven't read Perdido Street Station (mostly because I've never found a copy - China Mieville is one of my all time favourite authors), but I don't need to have to find this utterly enthralling. The pace, the writing, the plot, it's all got me hooked. Keep up the good work - can't wait for a new chapter!

Always good to see another update!

I thought this was supposed to have humans in it.

I'm hyped for what's next

Keep going

The environmental imagery was superb and the story told near the end was delightfully chilling.

I believe the word structure and dynamics you cast for the setting are both very well-written. Keep up the good work!

Eagerly awaiting the coming updates.

Damn fine story. Please continue.

You do a great job establishing the setting and tone of the story from the beat-up truck to the chaotic ZPD HQ. Your character descriptions were tastefully apt while still being detailed; despite just knowing them for a few scant paragraphs, you gave us a very good idea as to how Purrsia and Leonard look and act.

I look forward to seeing how this mystery unfolds.