Huh. A introspective type story. Intriguing.

The Literature me is squealing and babbling over this. The Student me is like, nope.

I loved it. The metaphors were chosen very well and creative.

Oh~ muy cierto. En Mexico no se teme a laoscuridad tanto como lo has descrito. Hay ciudades ( como la mia) en la que puedes caminar por el centro a media noche y no temes de nada. Claro son casos aislados pero reales. Me gusto como has desarrollado la reflexion

Fantastic~

Oh woooow. I'm speechless. This was absolutely awesome! It had this poetic lilt to it throughout the fic, and that last line just completely took my breath away. It was amazing and it's motivated me to write something, but I've no idea what XD I'll let you know when I find out. But yes, it's absolutely gorgeous. Amazing job on this, lovely!

Beautiful. I could picture the whole thing, beginning to end. Your writing is getting better. :)

I really liked this story and the ending... so good :D