I absolutely loved this! I love how you showed the development between the two as the days progressed. Even though it took place in a matter of weeks, I feel that you thoroughly gave enough detail that were able to actually see this really happening. Unlike some other stories I've read, the author usually has these two all over each other before we know it. I love how passionate Shizuo was and how Izaya played hard to get. I also love that you didn't make Izaya overly experienced. Although I do think that Izaya may be abbot free spirited, I hate how he's often described as loose and indifferent to his body. I loved that Izaya wasn't that great at oral sex but Shizuo was. I loved the chemistry you were able to envision between these two. Thank you, thank you so much for this. I wish the story didn't end here. I wish it'd continue to their life in Ikebukuro so we see their struggle adjusting to their relationship with their friends back home. Ah. So sad when something great has to end. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you, again!

Omgosh! I'm loving this story and I'm barely in chapter 5! I love authors who write lengthy chapters! Especially when the story is so good! Ahh! So excited to keep reading! (:

AAAAAHHHHHHH WHAT BEAUTY I APPRECIATE THIS STORY I STRANGLY ENJOYED IT

I got second hand embarrassment O.o

daww im just so in love with this fic
SEQUEL PLSSS

Yeyyy happy ending. I'm so happy.
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Love the story. You writing is just amazing.

Nooooo Shizu-chan :((((( -sobs -
Izaya is one scary bastard when angry.

Why so little reviews? ;-;

Kyahhhhh o So hot omgf!
Dirty Shizu-chan hehehe making Izaya all hot and meased up.
LOve their charecters

It's so good so far •o•
Love it ~

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR TIME AND EFFORT FOR THIS STORY, I LOVE IT TO BITS ;~;

Tomoko is so awesome! I hope Koizumi is sleepless for the rest of his life. The ending is soo cute and fluffy how they're holding hands the whole time *_* I don't think you can comment without an account on ao3 but I'll give kudos :)
Thank you for the story!

Awww! Such a beautiful ending. The bathroom scene in the plane was hilarious. Shizu-chan is so bold.
But my favorite scene was the last one. How Izaya was lost in thought and Shizu-chan easily managed to dispel his anxiety.

Holy shiiiit! Man did things ever hit the fan! Just. ..just. ...wow! I did not expect things to go that way!
Once again your writing is magnificent! You do such a great job of keeping everyone in character, including how Izaya dealt with Fukayama! I was totally expecting him to slit his throat but your way makes much more sense! Agh! I really hope Shizuo is going to make it!

Noooo! I… I’m sure Shizu-chan will survive, right? Wait! Why am I even asking this?! He WILL survive. Definitely. There is no other way.