That was amazing! The characterization, angst, banter, everyone was spot on. I especially liked "Just… doing her best burrito impression in the comms shack, because that's a perfectly normal place to sleep, especially when the person sleeping doesn't actually work in the comms shack". Seriously great work!

This is incredible! It's exactly how I imagine the characters in terms of character and interactions with others. Really good job and please tell me there's more!