Wes making the ship name was too much...

I feel bad for saying this, but I didn't like this chapter nearly as much as the other two. It's alright for what it is, but it got really weird for no reason. For example, what was the point of Soul going to Bora Bora? He wanted to get away, sure. But why did it have to be somewhere so far away and not a local hotel or some kind of jazz bar. Actually the jazz bar would've more fit his personality. Secondly, what was the point of bringing up his taste in porn? I guess that was to add character or possibly humor, but it had little to do with the plot and was awkward. Then finally why was Maka suddenly so bold in Bora Bora? Considering she has has no experience in romance and still doesn't know where she stands with Soul, it's strange to see her being so bold to him. Finally, what was the point of bringing Blackstar to Bora Bora? That had absolutely no importance to the plot, he didn't even show up for the part where Maka confronted Soul. If you're going to bring him with Soul to Bora Bora, have them interact before or during the confrontation to help set up the setting and mood of the characters. The actual scene of Soul finding out about the misunderstanding was done well though, and Kidd was handled respectfully. Overall I wouldn't say the chapter is bad, just that it didn't reach it's full potential.

Cute x30000000000000000000000

Yes I was so happy to see your update! I loved this it was wonderful. My mom literally walked in on me fangirling over this chapter and it was very awkward and embarrassing...but oh well.

Omg this is really funny and amazing pls Update soon! The next chapter should be so awkward for Maka!

OMG... I can't wait much longer... Pls update soon... It's eating me on the inside not knowing what happens next... Omg I'm gonna die... You're so talented in writing YAASSS QUEEN!

Omg... PLS update soon... I'm LITERALLY dying on the inside not knowing what happens next!

Omg...pls update soon... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hahahahahahhaha oh poor soul biggest misunderstanding ever!
Love your story!

Oh man Soul is in for sad surprise. Is it wrong I want Soul to get crushed next chapter. Not that I don't want a happy soma ending but I kinda want Soul to suffer a bit first. I'm excited for the next chapter, I can't wait.

nononnononono sending in pending doom

Sooooo goood :3

I'm excited to see what happens next. It's seems like things will get good next chapter.

That was adorable! And a bit sad at times, and funny too! The perfect mix! The writing is pretty good; a couple grammar mistakes here and there, but good! I'm glad I found this fic.
Keep writing!

Cool :D