I sorts like this but the stage script ruins it, sorry. But I think you should adjust this once again; despite it being done, and into a regular sentenced story then a movie script.

Now I normally don’t complain as much, but this story is indeed good, but it would be easier for a few others for regular wording.

Besides that, I would give this a 3 1/2 our of 5 Fan Fic Stars; due to the script writing instead of it being a story.

outstanding work! the sequel will be up soon enough

now all left is Dark Future

finally with the last chapter moves on here how it goes.

with ghidorah defeated the tachyons luna and celestia were furious however she order her tachyons brother to mind control the sombra company worker soo the can put their plans in motions once more, tachyons celestia see the won the battle however the battle is just only the begininig

meanwhile, railey have some talk with the dazzling leader adagio and railey wanted the dazzling to join them at their side, dispite adagio disagreements, aria and sonata decide to join because they have nowhere to go eventually adagio gives up and join railey but rainbow dash keep on watch of them incase they try anything funny.

meanwhile dr serizawa got a reports back from japan that another godzilla was terrorizing the city (shinGojira) and he need to return back to japan to see what happen there, with godzilla and others done their task the battle is over but zilla jr however stays while railey look at him.

she then thinking alot and finally decide that she wanted to bring back the HEAT team under her leadership which hicks disagree at first since dr nick disband the orignal team long ago but railey decide its the best that zilla jr cant do it alone by himself and now railey found her resposiblity that earth needs a defender and a familiar team resurface again called HEAT team which mane seven were happy minus starlight glimmer that they are on first time recreating the team once more.

foward to 2 weeks later the girls on a new HQ near the canterlot harbor stations which it used to be a ship refueling station and now a HQ, railey knew that there is more kaiju out of this world that havent been discorverd and she will continued where the original HEAT team left off.

look like thing gonna get messing

the king ghidorah has arrived and wreacking havoc in the canterlot city, destroying anything, while zilla having hard time fighting the king ghidorah, while that, railey decide to give the dazzling a chance to join even adagio refuse to join however both aria and sonata didnt have a choice but to join which a disagreement towards the humane seven, sci-twi knew what the dazzling did while starlight didnt even know what actually happen because she was sick at the time during rainbow rocks which pinkie explain to human starlight what actually happen. Hicks and his soldiers arrived to stop ghidorah however while that zilla jr was knocked out by the ghidorah tail, ghidorah was about to finished the mutant iguana when ancient godzilla arrived on time to stop ghidorah from killing zilla jr. meanwhile railey have a plan, she have a specialize mech that can be piloted by many people which the human seven is perfect and pinkie having her first time using a mech robots.

the ghidorah attack not just been appear on the news for anyone to see, but other villans also manage to see on their on TV what happen, from cameron winters while he was on his office watching the news, to General chrysalis while she was watching the news as well to tirek himself while he was watching the ghidorah attack using his mirror portal in tatarus prison and also The tribe of mu who is actually watching the news as well

while sombra company found the mutant komodo dragon, they trying to captured her but zilla protecting his lovers and attack the soldiers, while that hicks contacted railey that all of their equipments are now function to normal and railey asked a request to help

meanwhile the king ghidorah was been brainwashed finally, and tachyons uses them to launch an attack on the other kaiju. While back at earth the dazzling finally wakes up and notice a fight going on which railey notice them. The dazzling never see railey before but railey explained that since monorach have been known the dazzling for soo long due to their immortality they know who they are.

during the battle sombra himself inside the mech trying to battling zilla jr, however before anything can happen, ghidorah arrived during that fight which railey notice that ghidorah too have been brainwashed

i thinking next chapter that the girls and other found secert lab that make kaiji werapon until pinkie pie actdely drink the kaiji blood sample and turn into kaiji-pony power from and she still herself the other thought the magic and kaiji blood sample must mix into one and have new power tranformastion (i called it pony-kaiji form) with this sample they have a change to win this wars

Looks like Zilla is heading instinctly for Canterlot City like a salmon returning to the waters from which it was born. In my opinion Zilla thinks he's heading home.

soo pinkie pie saw in her dream that luna and celestia were contacting the alien tachyons in order to control the minds of a monster and people to submit their will when the invasion began which railey got themself concern then she notice that luna and celestia werent around which she got a hunch whats wrong with them both, if she right of course

meanwhile while trixie stays with zilla and komodithrax and komodozilla fluttershy explain that while communicating with zilla jr zilla used to have a dad that is the first zilla that lays egg asexually that doesnt required mating, however since zilla jr was born he didnt have a trait to lay eggs asexually but instead he can mate normally like normal animal since fluttershy bit weird that zilla with komoditrax and have a hybrid baby as well as she explain it to others

while that sci twilight have a discussions with pony twi that pony twi just back from crystal empire to see the crystalling ceremony and see the new born baby name flurry heart which human twilight shocked that human cadence and shining also name their baby flurry heart, that havent out just yet.

railey while that tracking luna and celestia location alongside with help of pinkie pie too since pinkie was were very helpfull in this missions, while searching them they both saw sombra company soldiers trying to find something else as well as they were hiding from them

The tachyons leaders manage to contact them, at first he see a human but then tachyons luna and celestia were however explain themself that they using this body to survive the earth and manipulate the humans as well, however they manage to detect the king ghidorah and decide to control it.

meanwhile trixie were demand explaination on what happen since she cant get a break from magical stuff then this monster wars stuff happens, and railey who trixie never saw before, explain trixie that aliens took control the monster. But before trixie could say anything she saw the dazzling and remembers that she got all the punishments and detention she got since the dazzling manipulate her and her friends which she got grounded for months thanks to the dazzling.
RD and applejack calmed trixie down before she do something more

while at zilla jr and fluttershy that zilla knew something was wrong soo he came back to safe them all including her as well, soo he wont let his friends got hurt. Railey examination towars zilla jr concluded that zilla jr were getting smarted instead following his instinct, when pony twilight arrived she saw the mess and railey told them that they need to find luna and celestia if they okay or not

with mothra and king ceasar battling with the mind controled kaiju the battle went heating up while zilla battling with ancient godzilla as godzilla having hard time attacking zilla due to zilla agility and mobility to move quicker when in battle. While the mind control siren who their face is cover with helmets are appear and trying to stop the girls from involved in the battle.

Human Starlight when back to get her stuff when she see the battle heads up and join in, in the battle rainbow dash knock the helmet off one of the sirens and it reveals to be adagio who railey notice they were mind control by the tachyons. While back with tachyons Luna, she contacted Tachyons Celestia about the fleet high commands as the alien forces wont be arriving soon just enough time for celestia to prepare anything while waiting their arrival.

Trixie was walking back to canterlot high to see if anything happen and saw zilla battling with godzila, when zilla was knock back the mind control godzilla saw trixie and blast his atomic ray at her as zilla immediatly grab her using his hand and take her to safety as trixie said she nearly got herself killed

Railey in other hand trying to figure out where to search the device, if she can destroy it, the kaiju will be back at normal

with monorach agency and military equipments were shut down hicks got a few reports from the military around the world that the kaiju suddenly attack them which shocked hicks that few of the mutant kaiju were should be at monster island. While railey decide to head back at canterlot high that she decide to be as a permenant students of canterlot high she saw rainbow dash and other with worried faces that when one of their friends pinkie pie is missing and railey were shocked.

however she recived and distress emergency call from hicks that all the monster in monster island are now attacking the cities around the world with the military down the world is now at chaos. Without warning suddenly rodan appear out of nowhere attacking them as they dodge their attack and railey was confused why rodan attacking that is untill she saw rodan eyes were green and she knew the tachyons were behind this. Rodan was about to attack again when zilla jr appear and attack the mind control rodan and defend the girls

fluttershy was happy to see zilla again while railey were relief that zilla jr wasnt under tachyon control this time, thanks to zilla jr strong mind of course, then the girls saw something shocking, that all the mind control kaiju are now appear with the green eye on it and including ancient godzilla, leaving the girls and zilla jr to defend themself against the kaiju and mutant kaiju

nice this is another grand plan for the tachyons.

While that tachyons celestia mind control the sirens as the sirens fall into her control. The brainwash thug are command to trash down this cafe to prevent any eyewitnesses, the mind control siren were task to disguise themself as sombra company commando soldier to sabotage hicks radar array that installed near crystal prep high.

While at crystal prep high the former crystal prep students take a visit at crystal prep high and saw headmistress cinch were fired by the board for teaching the students to do bad things such as cheating, lying and acting like a snobby and also against what the friendship games means, allowing cadence to become the new headmistress of crystal prep high.

meanwhile railey was working on her office with her sad face on as serizawa approach her and ask why sad? railey have a feeling inside her that, ever since she first meet pinkie than the other friends she grows fond with them, she kinda misses them. Serizawa tells her that she got a premissions to become a student again at canterlot high which is make railey happy.

while that also tachyon luna were able to build a mind control disc tower that were installed at radio station at canterlot city as tachyon luna type something on her laptop the first kaiju to appear is ancient godzilla that been control and began attacking the city with the rest of mosnter appear. Zilla on other hand sense this familiar feeling and decide to surface again to investigate.

after the battle celestia and luna return back from their offices untill their eyes went green and began using their laptop to contact sombra himself that the uploading has complete and the people wasnt unaware that their beloved teacher is now under their control. While pinkie pie was walking to the school hall since she forgot her cellphone, she overheard principal celestia and luna as they talk really strange. Luna decide the have to contact her remaing tachyons brother that still keep in the cylinders, ordering them to reconfigure the computer system on sombra company faclities for later use while that luna wanted sombra died soo the remaining tachyon could brainwash the workers and she wanted the captive mutant kaiju to be release soo sombra would be belived that a system malfunction at that cage.

celestia on other hand were decide to find this...siren and wanted three former siren girls from battle of the bands and brainwash them soo three of the girls could make a distraction. Pinkie was shocked but before she could leave celestia was already knew and lift her up with her power. Pinkie demanding the tachyons to get out from their bodies and the tachyon going to use this body to survive on earth atmosphere and luna erase pinkie memory preventing her to know anything or everything she heard what luna and celestia said as she passed out on the ground.

Later on at hicks mobile base, railey decide to have a talk with him since she didnt like hicks that much. She ask anything unsual when celestia and luna were capture, hicks told her everything on how the found the principal, and railey getting really suspicious.

meanwhile the tacyon celestia were walking on the street in the middle of the night, some of the thug that wanted to robbed her stuff were now brainwashed by her. She found the siren in the cafe, the same cafe from the start of rainbow rocks.

Adagio were planning stuff but aria were getting bored and give up, soo does sonata that they should accepted their defeat and join them. Adagio refused but then she saw celestia acompany with two brainwash thug. adagio were very nervous as why the principal doing here and how whe know where they are?, before anything happen celestia immediatly brainwash the three sirens and the girls were brainwashed quickly. Celestia contact luna though telepathic mind telling her the siren is now under their control and luna suggest that use the siren to dressed up as sombra company elite soldiers to sabotage the military and monorach equipments to cause chaos, while luna in other hand has completed the mobile mind control disc, able to control not just king ghidorah but also ancient godzilla and others kaiju except zilla because he too hard to be mind control

this is getting good.

while that godzilla and king ghidorah are battling in the busy city of canterlot. At trixie home she was sleeping because she was trapped in equestria for whole month and tired until one of godzilla foot steps her house and trixie wakes up that half of her house is destroyed and trixie couldnt take a break for once from anything weird.

back at the other girls using HEAT seeker boat, they finally arrived after needed a help from mothra, as the giant moth are now aiding godzilla while zilla jr are also aiding ancient godzilla by side, as three kaiju battle the three headed dragons.

meanwhile back at railey and pinkie, they manage to found the others as hicks and serizawa arrived on time to see what happen while luna and celestia stay inside the jeep. Unknown to them all both luna and celestia look each other before focusing on king ghidorah as both of the principal eyes turn green for a second and for all the sudden king ghidorah stops and immediatly flee, which is weird why while the tachyon possed luna and celestia just pretending to act normal which is work when everyone belived it except pinkie which her pinkie sense act very strange on those two principal while railey asked her why and pinkie didnt like they way luna and celestia acting.