This story is so amazing, keeps me on my toes every chapter wondering what will happen next. So far I have not come across a single thing I don't like in this story (or the original for that matter). Unfortunately, my inner gun nerd cannot let one small, rather annoying (because it feels like I'm putting the story down for a mistake when I'm not) detail go. Glocks do not have safeties. Yep...that's what's got me annoyed, pathetic right? xD...as a proud Glock owner, I just had to point that out. This story is still one of the best I've read on the sight, which is saying something considering how many I've read, and I still find no problems with it. Hell, I probably won't ever find one in this story, or the sequel when I finish this one. Keep up the good work.

This was an amazing story! Having the POV of Owen just made it that much better.

love love to re-read this!

Just as awesome as I expected it to be author-San!

-_- Oh Owen, this is one of the few times I will ever say this about future couples, but, OWEN STOP CARING! She'll come around.-_-

OOOh, I like this chapter! Don't give in just yet Owen! YEEZY!

Oh my gosh. That ending with Jo made me laugh SO HARD! OMG THAT WAS HILARIOUS!

god i love his wit, pair it with barry and you have me crying with laughter.
that bear and the reactions to it were the best.

I absolutely love this story. I can't wait for the next story!

loved it...

This is my first read of a Jurassic world/park fanfic. My god-you set the bar so incredibly high. I will forever judge every story by this standard. I love it! Wonderful lengthy chapters, consistency, correct grammar-i was so happy reading this and I'm so sad I finished it! Keep up the fantastic work!

That. Was. Adorable. Jo and Owen are adorable. (I did wonder about Owen's views on the Bungalow of Love, so that was supremely satisfying) I have to say that seeing this chapter from Owen's POV definitely kicked the sweet factor up a lot. Who knew he was a romantic?

This all said, I am sad that this story is over but CANNOT WAIT for the sequel! I am ecstatic to see where you take the JW universe and story with Jo tossed in. Also, good luck with that camping thing and see you on your next story. *waves* bye!

So I have to ask. Is Jo ever going to find out that Owen killed someone for her? I can see some heavy self hatred coming out of that.

Great chapter! Owen's latent homicidal feelings towards threats was amusing to read and his reaction to Jo waking up was heartwarming. I swear though, even though I read this chapter from Jo's POV, I still expect her to answer "awesome!" after finding out how many times she died.

Ooh, did not see that coming! Never thought Owen would take the shot. I completely agree with you, by the way. Love triangles are far too overdone.

Very well done. I look forward to the sequel.