Reviews for Firery Christmas for Steve
me chapter 6 . 12/22/2018
more? this is cute and I hate myself for liking it lmao. (also put Erika and Arthur together. I dare u. he needs a strong willed girl who will boss him around but they're adorably in love. she thinks he's the most sunshiny adorable person ever, and he thinks she's a beautiful woman who is his own superhero. sksksksk)
SonofLoki513 chapter 6 . 12/12/2017
Please continue with this story it’s really good
Plain Jane Pixie chapter 5 . 3/21/2017
This is a very interesting story. Sam is a very likable character and I can't wait to see how her relationship with Steve turns out. That is... if she's okay. Please continue this story. (: You have me gripped.
nekadevil chapter 5 . 12/2/2016
You know, your story is quite nice :) It's just your grammar and spelling. Sometimes it's really horrible...
You definitely do need beta! The part of problem is in the way you are using times. You are jumping from Past Simple to Present Simple all the time so it doesn't look logical. And comas, do use them more often! It will make your story easier for understanding ;)
But generally I like it! :)))
sad.sooong chapter 5 . 7/12/2016
Ooooooo! Cliff hanger! I love it! Let's see what happens next! I LOVE IT!
Jasmine chapter 4 . 6/30/2016
I find it very heartwarming and hope that there will be new chapters
sad.sooong chapter 4 . 6/6/2016
Wow! I love. Can you please update
Guest900 chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
Love! Love! Love! Keep working hard! This just keeps getting better and better!
Guest900 chapter 3 . 3/26/2016
Sorry for so many reviews, they're all from my friends. They wanted to review too but they had a heard time finding the story. But they love it!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/24/2016
Oh, Peter (the elf) is not going to like this.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2016
Great story I love how you put Steve's love interest, nice. Doing good. Keep it up.
Skylar chapter 3 . 3/23/2016
Just red it, I love this story! Oh! When Sam comes home she should just walk past by Steve and just fall asleep on her bed. Well it's your story, you're an amazing life Arthur Christmas story writer! Keep up the good work!
Skylar chapter 2 . 3/23/2016
Oh, me thinks Steven is gonna be really happy or get his life thrown off a building. Sorry but this is an awesome story, KEEP WRITING. Because I see the next chapter.
Skylar chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
This is an amazing story, and you're doing great keep writing.
Guest900 chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
Boom ! I love this story keep, keep writing please! Even my friend likes it!
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