Reviews for Firery Christmas for Steve |
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me chapter 6 . 12/22/2018 more? this is cute and I hate myself for liking it lmao. (also put Erika and Arthur together. I dare u. he needs a strong willed girl who will boss him around but they're adorably in love. she thinks he's the most sunshiny adorable person ever, and he thinks she's a beautiful woman who is his own superhero. sksksksk) |
SonofLoki513 chapter 6 . 12/12/2017 Please continue with this story it’s really good |
Plain Jane Pixie chapter 5 . 3/21/2017 This is a very interesting story. Sam is a very likable character and I can't wait to see how her relationship with Steve turns out. That is... if she's okay. Please continue this story. (: You have me gripped. |
nekadevil chapter 5 . 12/2/2016 You know, your story is quite nice :) It's just your grammar and spelling. Sometimes it's really horrible... You definitely do need beta! The part of problem is in the way you are using times. You are jumping from Past Simple to Present Simple all the time so it doesn't look logical. And comas, do use them more often! It will make your story easier for understanding ;) But generally I like it! :))) |
sad.sooong chapter 5 . 7/12/2016 Ooooooo! Cliff hanger! I love it! Let's see what happens next! I LOVE IT! |
Jasmine chapter 4 . 6/30/2016 I find it very heartwarming and hope that there will be new chapters |
sad.sooong chapter 4 . 6/6/2016 Wow! I love. Can you please update |
Guest900 chapter 1 . 4/6/2016 Love! Love! Love! Keep working hard! This just keeps getting better and better! |
Guest900 chapter 3 . 3/26/2016 Sorry for so many reviews, they're all from my friends. They wanted to review too but they had a heard time finding the story. But they love it! |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/24/2016 Oh, Peter (the elf) is not going to like this. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2016 Great story I love how you put Steve's love interest, nice. Doing good. Keep it up. |
Skylar chapter 3 . 3/23/2016 Just red it, I love this story! Oh! When Sam comes home she should just walk past by Steve and just fall asleep on her bed. Well it's your story, you're an amazing life Arthur Christmas story writer! Keep up the good work! |
Skylar chapter 2 . 3/23/2016 Oh, me thinks Steven is gonna be really happy or get his life thrown off a building. Sorry but this is an awesome story, KEEP WRITING. Because I see the next chapter. |
Skylar chapter 1 . 3/22/2016 This is an amazing story, and you're doing great keep writing. |
Guest900 chapter 1 . 3/22/2016 Boom ! I love this story keep, keep writing please! Even my friend likes it! |