| Reviews for Long Live The Wolf |
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   Zolta chapter 6 . 5/10 Good story despite some language issues and timeline inconsistencies. ie, you mentioned the Sept of Baelor even though Baelor wasn't born yet as his father Aegon III was just married. The King who Bore the Sword, Daemon Blackfyre, is a son of Aegon IV, who is only a year old, who is a son of Viserys II, the current Hand of the King, ergo timeline inconsistencies. Thanks |
| Hadrian.Caeser chapter 7 . 3/29/2019 Great story |
| sarah-rose76646 chapter 5 . 1/12/2019 The story is not going in a direction I like, so I'm not going to continue with it, but I do wish you the best of luck with it. Also, one criticism I would like to offer is for the grammatical errors and typos. If English is not your first knowledge then it can be a bit challenging to get the sentence structure and Grammer right. But a beta should be able to correct the mistakes and keep the story interesting. The mistakes distracts one from fully enjoying the event unfolding, as you keep on noticing them rather than imagining it in your mind. Regards Sarah |
| Freakdogsflare chapter 7 . 1/10/2019 Plz update soon. |
| Rak Ewo chapter 7 . 1/8/2019 Please don't discontinue. |
| BigWilly526 chapter 5 . 4/30/2018 Fuck aegon and the targs, seriously, what an arrogant brat |
| Asoiaf fanatic chapter 6 . 1/15/2018 Your story is great Awsesome Keep it up Update soon I see there are some people who are discouraging you. Ignore them, they are lonely tw*ts who got nothing better to do. Your story is really good and I would like you to update soon |
| 0ak3nsh13ldl0v3r chapter 6 . 7/9/2017 I'm gonna be stupid and ask you to dumb down all the politics b******t that I never understand. Preferably for the whole fic. One or two sentences would be perfect. Ppppppppplllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzz! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/19/2017 the source of the white knife is white harbor so how can the boltons control it? lots of speeling errors and words missing which is becoming annoying at the frequency the it is happening. storyline is decet |
| anonimus maximus chapter 6 . 11/12/2016 good fic, then the North become independent next to the Iron Islands and Dorne? I think it's great, and you should build schools for culturizar the population, besides imparting military strategy and weapons, so you can call more men in wartime. |
| marsolino chapter 2 . 9/27/2016 Interesting |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/31/2016 I sorry you really beings fucking stupid and adding your own shit and trying to make it seem it make sense. No it does not |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/31/2016 I sorry but fuck your story. I mean wtf are doing? |
| Darksnider05 chapter 3 . 5/31/2016 The Reach doesn't have a hundred thousand troops that was the combined men between them and Renly. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/28/2016 I thought this story was great! |
