I don't usually get much out of romance, but that's why I love all the description of the "chemistry" or "electricity" between the characters here - often writers leave readers to fill that in, but this story lets me feel it. I also like the mix of naturalness and elegance of the dialogue and the thoughtful attention to detail.

This was a really great story! You managed to capture both the old style of FF Tactics and the joy of a fresh love so well. I would love to see more of this couple from you, or any great fluff like it. Keep up the great work!

This one-shot feels absolutely flawless! You do a very good job of capturing the scene that the 'innocent girlfriends' are in with your descriptive imagery and way of detailing their actions and thoughts. I look forward to reading more of your works, if your style is so fluid and nice like this one-shot was.