Reviews for A Canvas of Crowns
Kairan1979 chapter 7 . 7/19
It's interesting to see Lannisters already did more to Jon than his 'father''s wife.
Kairan1979 chapter 5 . 7/19
I half-expected the King to give something to Jon too, if only fo upset the Queen.
wishitweretrue24 chapter 17 . 7/17
Lolol Daario is gonna be piiiiissed if Jon snakes Dany from him
NarutoMorningStar chapter 17 . 6/18
Another good story abandoned. Fabulous. Jon Snow goes to Essos done right.
sarsa13 chapter 5 . 5/25
I decided to read this story again, it is one of my favorite. I hope you managed to published one of your original stories as you wished. This fan fiction was done very well, I hope someday you'll consider finishing it. Here you said that you had planned the general plotline, I would be curious to know how the story was supposed to end. Unfortunately, the whole serie turned out to be disappointing for me. Season 3 was good but after the purple wedding the TV show began to loose too much quality. I think that the last seasons, in particular, were done quite badly. Anyway, I wished there were other fan fictions as good as yours around. If I want to read something in this fandom, usually I choose this story or "Her Life and Her Death" written by magicmoon111 (I don't know if you read it). Both great, even if unfinished. I love your characterizations and the focus on Jon and King Robert, who usually dies too early but whose reaction to Jon's identity has the potential to be the most interesting. Seriously, I needed this plot in my life so thank you. It is a shame that I probably will have to forget the promise of an "epic length" story, but better this than nothing ahahah. I love everything about the existing chapters, every idea. Jon's journey to the south is fantastic, as well as the way in which he adapts differently compared to the Starks and his relationship with Ned or his interactions with Robert and other characters... oh! and I like the fact that Jon is not a copy of Ned Stark but actually has his own personality (and an intriguing one too) in this plot. I really like everything, I really wanted to underline how much I appreciate your work even after all this time. I wish you well and, again, thank you
vindictive Glory chapter 8 . 5/12
I freaken knew it I was just waiting for the Daynes to get introduced. Would be one helluva thing if Jon was actually a bastard
vindictive Glory chapter 7 . 5/12
Holy shit his getting him to chase the Daynes
vindictive Glory chapter 6 . 5/12
Damn Tyrion is pretty blunt even with a maester
vindictive Glory chapter 5 . 5/12
Arya got pretty freaken lucky
vindictive Glory chapter 4 . 5/12
Hah love the dynamic between jon and tyrion
vindictive Glory chapter 3 . 5/11
Ahhh so bran was pushed and some interaction with Jon and the King it went quite well, giving the Jung further depth
vindictive Glory chapter 2 . 5/11
Different but the same, still it is interesting
vindictive Glory chapter 1 . 5/11
Very well written, I could almost mistake it for the real thing.
The Sound Shaman chapter 1 . 5/7
I didn't read this, just, had to review your summary. You claim it shall be epic in length, and (reasonably) throw shade at grrm, yet it's only 60k words long and hasn't been updated in nearly 3 years. Sooooo, your summary is a lie, and you talk a much bigger game than you play. You claimed to be super ambitious, and failed hard. If you're still alive and on this site, maybe edit the summary of your abandoned story to be accurate. Something like "I started writing a fanfiction, it got to a respectable length, then I stopped. Also a few years ago I was kind of a dick and thought potshots at the author of the source material and bragging about future story length was more important to my summary than, ya know, an actual summary. Because I'm very bad at decision making." Something like that.
Manneratvag chapter 17 . 4/19
Very interrsting story! I hope we see more.
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