So, while I've never yet finished the series. I am fairly sure that it would be out of character for Tabitha to... be loud; yes, I realize that everyone has their snapping points, but I feel Tabitha could've simply levitated Louise a bit instead. Granted, I know this is your story, and I'm sure there's explanation for this. Enjoying the story so far.

Every so often, there are stories like this that explore a dark side, FE; Scar Tissue in the Evangelion section, where Shinji suffers abuse from Asuka. I think its a god idea to have these humbling and sobering stories, so that we don't get too focused on happiness. I know this ends with a happy end, but what I'm talking about is the mood of the story in general. I really like how you started this off, and I know I've got a few chapters yet to read. Just saying, this is a good read.

The beginning is literally a way to 'bash' the character 101.

Finally, Saito faces another OP person.

Is Kirche going to be added to the Harem as 'payment' from her family?

And also, shame on you Saito, you forgot to mention Tiffa when you were listing your girlsfriends/lovers to Oriana.

Nice twist with Joseph NOT being a total d*ck till the end and freeing Sheffield plus saving her life.

Can't wait to read what you planned for her.

So now maybe we can get an idea of what is the relation between the Water spirit and the Wind spirit. Most likely it's some kind of friendly rivalry or something, but I'm looking forward to see your idea.

Really glad he isn’t totally dependent on his runes, and even without them you’d figure he has some muscle memory of his time using them

Awww that wasa sweet way to end combat and I loved the realiztion Agnes has as time pushes forward of her love ubtil it bust like a dam along with growth of the others and I appreciate the light on Cattelya abd Ellenore making them having intrigue here

Karin wants to spar... GULP two Ellenore getting even more Derek with her new true friend clapping ensues and Cattelya that teae

Awww peruculan I say nay

I was low-key expecting the offer of Cattelya now the fact that they than mentioned Ellenore had me F-ing rolling I was low-key deceased

Pssst psssst Saito rule Albion take the job maybe so hopefully I'm willing. Also yikes when Serena is talking to Saito about needing to do things you know it's serious. I can't wait for him too interact and start talking about the issues that he has

Void mages pet wolves cousins. Also gotta love the bond of understanding between him and Tiffania because it's not that he doesn't love the others it just something he can't do with them yet. And I love all these interactions with and Agnes they are well earned keep the stories coming

Well than Tiffania you thinking about it at least you not gonna just not try