the idea is good but it feels rushed could have been better if stretch it out a bit cause something that really kills my interest in a story is forced romantic in this case Natsu and hisui were together for two weeks before wanting to get married but the revelation of himself to everyone after three years was good enough for my taste again just wich you stretch it out a bit or took you time writing it cause to rushed feeling really hinders potentially great stories like NatsuXHisui that all for now

Bro basic math ain't that hard. 3 years after 792 is 795, not 794

Igneel didn't say that and I didn't say what you had me say when Igneel died.

Hey look another shit story that has Natsu acting like an OOC douche-bag for no reason because the retarded author thinks that being an anti-social douchebag is cool.

I like it your should continue

well, i like it but it was also a little weird. Anyway, nice work.

Nice? wayy to many "giggles" from hisui in my opinion.

This is to be expected from a NaLu writer; another masterpiece that disregards and discards NaLu in a compelling and artful manner.

Awesome work, can't wait for future stories of yours.

a master piece. amazing 10/10 IGN lol