Reviews for Ishq hai Tumse
Shiv chapter 7 . 10/8/2018
mindblowing..par samajh nahi ae thori kahan gae thi shreya aur wapas kb ae
Shiv chapter 6 . 10/8/2018
nice and emo
Shiv chapter 5 . 10/8/2018
sooooooooooooo sweetttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
Shiv chapter 4 . 10/8/2018
good
Shiv chapter 3 . 10/8/2018
niceeeee
Shiv chapter 2 . 10/8/2018
extra awesome
Shiv chapter 1 . 10/8/2018
nyc
vampire's feelings chapter 7 . 5/24/2018
Awesome I loved it so much
Nidi chapter 6 . 3/19/2018
Type your review .continu kartha or b acha hota
asd chapter 2 . 11/25/2017
rajat purvi hi good hain
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2017
Nyc stry
Guest chapter 2 . 2/28/2017
I love this story so much. It brings tears to my eyes. Good job
princess Mohini chapter 7 . 2/24/2017
nikhil and oc
in beuro
every one busy in file work...acp air enter in beuro
acp- good morning all of you
all-good morning sir.
acp-Aaj new officer join karne wali hai
abhijeet-sir ab tak toh use aata chahiye tha
acp - aati hi hogi...
suddenly one beautiful girl enter in beuro ...she in black jeans ...pink top .and long free hairs
girl- inaspacter muskan reporting sir.
acp- welcome to cid muskan ...another tumhe sabase intro karvata hoon...pointing to daya ..ye hai...
muskan- I know sir ye daya sir hai ye darvaja todate hai aur sabki care karate hai...pointing abhijeet...ye hai abhijeet sir daya sir ki Jan aur may be tarika ji ki bhi ..pointing freddy...ye hai freddy sir emotional and ye apani biwi see bahut darate hai...pointing shreya ..ye hai shreya mam inkelia do cheeje sabse important hai pehala apana deuty aur dusare daya sir...kyon sabki bare main sahi kahan na ...
all are shockad ki ise itani sari jankari kaise hai
abhijeet - muskan tumhe kuch jyada hi pata humare bare main ...koi khabari hai yahan tumhara...he said with smile
muskan- aisa hi hai kuch sir surprise hai
suddenly one dashing guy enter In beuro
guy-sir Aapane ye file mangi thi
acp - yes nikhil .aur isase milo ye hai pointing to muskan...
nikhil - baby tum yaha ...
he came near muskan and hugged her tightly ...
they become separate ...nikhil put a hand one her head and said
nikhil -baby tumhe to fever hai ..tum yahan Kyon Aai muze call kiya hota main aajata tumhe milne ne ke liye...ab chalo hospital ...and he kept her wrist ..
muskan- meri bat toh suno niku...
nikhil-baby muze kuch Nahi sunana chalo
muskan- niku ...
tum aisa nahin manogi na and he kept har In bridle style
muskan- niku statue ...ab sun maine Aaj hi join kiya hai socha tumhe surprise doongi ...Lekin tum toh aate hi shuru Ho gaye yar ...ab muze niche utar muze
nikhil blushed badly ...and all are confused and laughing
meanwhile a phone rang ...purvi kept a phone
..hello cid beuro ...
..kya khoon ..kahan ..
Church gate ...
..hum abhi pohachate hai ...
purvi - sir church gate par kisi ladki ki lash mili hai ...Hume abhi vaha jana hoga...
and again second phone rang ...Kept a phone shreya
...kya khoon kahan pe ...hum abhi pohachate hai
shreya - sir city mall main ek ladke ki lash mili hai ...
acp - thik hai abhijeet ,purvi ,dushyant aur muskan tum city mall Jao ...aur daya , kavin , shreya aur nikhil tum log church gate Jao...
all are ready to go nikhil came near to muskan and hugged her and said
nikhil - baby apana khyal rakhana ...aur case solve hote hi hum hospital jayenge OK...and he separate from hug ...
muskan - niku main thik hoon aur tum bhi apana khyal rakhana ...and she kissed him on her cheek ...
all are going in to the beuro
in the car daya drive a car behind sit kavin in back sit nikhil and shreya in complete silence
daya broke a silence
daya said to nikhil - nikhil tum muskan ko kabse jante Ho ...lagata hai bahut pyaar karte Ho usase
nikhil blushed and said - apani Jan se jyada ...mera is duniya main usake alava koi Nahi hai ...ye become teary ...and said agar use kuch hogaya toh main jee Nahi paunga Mar jaunga ...
shreya - nikhil tum aisa mat kaho muskan ko kuch nahin hoga jab tak tum usake sath Ho...
daya- right shreya ...chlo church gate aa gaya ...kuch kam bhi karate hai...
in city mall muskan check a body ...investigation all officer ..
in evening case are solved all are coming in beuro
acp- good job muskan ..
muskan - thanks sir
acp went to the beuro 5 pm ...abhijeet said ab chalu sab ghar chalate hai but suddenly muskan fainted on floor but nikhil kept in strong arm ...muskan is unconscious
nikhil in worried tone - baby kya hua ...aankhe kholo ...he becomes teary
daya- ise jaldi se le chalate hai ...
nikhil kept har in bridle style ...all are going to city hospital ...
nikhil - sir ise kya hua hai ...ye aakhe kyon nahin khol rahi hai ...he cried very badly
daya kept a hand on his shoulder ...nikhil become hug to daya and cry ...daya hug to back ...after some time they separated ...doctor came and said
doctor - aap ko inake
nikhil - dost hoon kyon
doctor - wo bahut week hai ...lagata hai unhonne Kal se kuch nahin kaha hai ...plz take care of her...and doctor went ...nikhil came near muskan bade ..she sleep on bed ...nikhil sit near she and kept her hand ...and he cry ..and kiss on her hand ...muskan wake up ...and smile to see nikhil care about her ...
muskan - niku tum ro rahe Ho ...
nikhil - rou nahin toh kya karu ...Tumne khana kyon nahin khaya Kal se ...
muskan - niku I am sorry ...aage se aisa Nahi hoga ...
nikhil - hona bhi nahin chahiye ...agar Tumhe kuch Ho gaya toh main toh Mar jaunga ...
muskan kept her hand on his mouth
muskan - plz aisi bat dobara mat karna ..
she hug him very tight as possible and crying very badly
nikhil - kya hua baby...
muskan - kuch nahin ...Lekin main tumhe khona nahin chahati ...tum muze chodake toh nahin jaoge na ...
nikhil give a kiss on her forehead
nikhil - kabhi nahin ...bhala koi apani Jan ko chodake ja sakata hai kya...
abhijeet daya and all are come in room
daya said - tum logon ka romance khatam Ho gaya Ho toh hum ghar Chale
nikhil and muskan blushed
muskan try to stand up but she is very week she did not stand properly ...nikhil see her situation
nikhil - may I baby ...
muskan - ya sure
nikhil Kept her in bridle style ...and sit in car back sit ...car drive a daya and behind shreya ...muskan kept har head on nikhil sholder ...and she close eyes ...
nikhil - kya hua baby ...tum thik Ho na ... ...nikhil keep his hand on around her
muskan - hmmmmm
nikhil - pakka na ...
muskan - niku I love you
nikhil - I love you toooo
she smiled and close her eyes ...and feel very secure in his arm
shreya and daya smile to see a pure love to each other
daya - nikhil tumhara ghar aahe gaya ...aura muskan ka ghar kahan hai ..
nikhil - sir mere ghar ka bagal wala ghar baby ka hai ...
daya - take care muskan OK ...with smile.
nikhil see that she sleep very deep with smile ...nikhil Kept in a bridle style ...
nikhil - by Sir ...by shreya
daya and shreya - byyyy niku
nikhil listen niku word and smile shyly
after some days in beuro
nikhil - sir maine aur baby ne faisala kiya hai ki ...
muskan cut and side hug to nikhil
muskan - hum Sunday ko engagement karenge aur agale mahine shadi ...
acp- ye toh bahut acchi bat hai ...congratulations ..
abhijeet - congratulations to both
muskan and nikhil - thanks sir
after some time all went go to the cafebaria only muskan and nikhil present in beuro ...nikhil is full of tears in eyes ...muskan saw and she him ...and put a hand on his shoulder ...nikhil turn and hugged her very tight as possible ...and crying very badlly...muskan can not understand but she give hug back and rubbed his back ...
muskan - kyanite hua niku ...pehale shant Ho jao ...plz niku mere liye
nikhil in teary voice- pata nahin kyon baby Lekin muze Aaj mom aur dad ki bahut yad aahe rahi hai ...he become hugged very tight...and again cry...
muskan become teary voice - yad toh muze bhi aahe rahi hai mom and dad ki ...par main khud ko sambhalati hoon Kyonki muze pata hai ki tum mere sath Ho meri care karne me liye ...humare mom and dad hote toh kitane khush hote Aaj ...
they both are very cry in each other arms
meanwhile all in beuro ...muskan and nikhil separated and wipped each other tears
abhijeet - kya hua agar tumhare mom dad Nahi hai ...hum hai na ...main nikhil tumhara bhai ...
daya- aur Mai muskan ka
shreya-aur main nikhil ki behen ...
purvi -main muskan ki behen ... cool na ...
muskan and nikhil full of tears saw a love for us
muskan- I am very happy today ...ki muze bhi ek family mil gayi ...
she become teary daya side hugged and said -meri behan kyon to rahi hai
muskan listen to word behana and she didn't control her self and to hugged tightly daya ...and said- bhai
daya- ab smile karo my princess
muskan smilled very lightly ...all are very happy

after some days Sunday.
muskan and nikhil engagement ...day
nikhil sing a song looking muskan
this is for you baby
and he start sing
tum jo aaye jindagi main bat ban gayi 2
sapne Teri chahaton ki tekhata hoon har ghadi
tum jo aaye jindagi main bat ban gayi
oooooooooooooooooooo
all clapped and muskan hugged to nikhil

a day was married day nikhil and muskan
marriage was completed
daya said nikhil - meri princess ka khyal rakhana
nikhil - yes sir ...as your order
all laugh again
nikhil and muskan lived a marriage life very happily
Tejal-aayushi chapter 1 . 10/8/2016
I have a request the sixth chapter OS that u write on sachvi please please make it a long story including all the c.i.d officers and make sachin purvi also officer of c.i.d please
guest chapter 7 . 8/31/2016
That was so sweet loved this os on rajeya plz write a story on them too i am their die heart fan plzzz its a request
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