so cute hope you update.

Shikaku is a devious friend. Lol

Good Story so far in my eyes-. I wonder what surprises await Inoichi AND if maybe Karma will strike back at Shikaku on how he teases his friend.

What might happen with Ino and Naruko? Can'T wait for more.

so far so good, though it hadn't been updated on a while. I wonder how his wife will react to 'ino 2'. XD

You need to come back or get your self an editor instead of a spell checker because there are a lot of missing words or words that are just wrong in the first place even if those words were spelled correctly because the words were used incorrectly spell checker will miss them all the time.

Spelling and grammar. Aspiration is something you aspire to. You've used it as appreciation. You've thrown out a few incomplete sentences as well. That being said, ino naru sisters sounds super cute and i look forward to further chapters. Just remember spell check doesn't edit. That takes a human eye. Good luck!

This is a really good start. The second idea sound very fun!

if you put in character tag "naruko" or in your summary, you put in 'fem naru', i and a lof of female naruto fan would have found your story and get more people into your story.

Does Naruto/Inoko get to meet Ino? I like the idea. But will Ino resent Naruto/Inoko or act like a sister?

Love it so far! Was what teuchi was telling shikaku (whom was told by minato) that he was related to the yamanka? Like inoichi and minato being half brothers or something?

PLEASE POST SOON!

Well This was a Vary Interesting First Chapter LOL and it was kind of Funny with Inoichi being so clueless... but then again most Men are when it comes to taking care of children

till next message bye