Rich language! Nice train of thought. I truthfully enjoyed your dialogue.

Awesome work!

The back and forth in this is brilliant. Great writting :)

"...Simon Cowell" ROTFLMAO

Great story!

I enjoyed this story even if it was really just a talk between them. I think you did a good job.

very good, loved

Brilliant!~~

Hey, as a fellow writer and professional procrastinator myself, I totally know how you feel. I find its good to take a breather and/or reread what you've written when you come to a part you don't like or are stuck on. Loving this, by the way. Keep up the good work!

This is amazing. You have an incredible grip on the characters the story, sheer language- I've been reading this with baited breath and am enjoying every line. Thanks for writing this!

Loved it! You capture both the character so well I can pretty much hear them speaking the words. Can't wait for the next chapter!

That was great!

:D

I'm new around here, and so had the advantage of reading all five chapters at once. Let me just say, wow! Stellar writing and fantastic characterization. I look forward to reading the end, and will absolutely be checking out your other work.

Awesome!