I just found this series and I'm really bummed it hasn't been updated yet. This huge truth bomb has just dropped and I want to see where this goes.

please...DONT STOP WRIGHTING

Love this story.

Please, for the love of [insert-anything-here] continue this! This story is awesome!

Great story, keep it up!

Sad this fic has been abandoned I really liked it

Awesome book, I really hope to see more of it.

It's a shame this is seemingly abandoned, but on the off chance that it ever gets updated AND you happen to plan for pairings I'm totally shipping Clark/Yang. Those two seem pretty well fit from what I've read~

Hope this fanfiction updates. This story is really quite entertaining and enjoyable. Just hope you can fix your grammatical errors on the he and she parts. It's quite confusing.

This is a tragically underrated story, seriously practically all of your stories are underrated yet they're an awesome read

please update, I'm really getting into the story.

Update please.

You need to continue this please! I love it so far!

I really liked this chapter. Finally Clark meet them as RWBY team and meet Weiss for first time. I liked the flashback. It show very good moments between Clark and Yang.
Finally JOR-EL talk to Clark. Liked what you did in the end. He has to know what he has lost. He finally has closure.

I am glad he is in school and also can keep eyes on girls. Good work.